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In some Cities people are choealng cars bicycle, uhik is ather cilies riding bikes is Jeplaing Carda why is this the think is beler? inslial a casee which develo bment you

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cities are switching to
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IELTS essay In some Cities people are choealng cars bicycle, uhik is ather cilies riding bikes is Jeplaing Carda why is this the think is beler? inslial a casee which develo bment you

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