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The picture describe the city Frenton was like in 1990 and modernized in 2012

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This picture shows what the city of Frenton was like in 1990 and modernized in 2012. Overall, it is clear that Frenton had fewee tree and more buildings appeared than 32 years ago Previously, there was a bank building in the center of the left side of the picture, and in 2012 a new building was built in its place. The bank was demolished. The hospital area was also built larger. The place did not change. The cinema was replaced by a teate building. Large supermarkets were created instead of shops. Cafe and park areas were destroyed and replaced by hotels and golf courses. The main street remained the same in 2012 as it was before. The location of the library has not changed at all.
This picture
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shows
what the city of
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Frenton
was like in 1990 and modernized in 2012.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that
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Frenton
had
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fewee
tree and more
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buildings
appeared than 32 years ago

Previously, there was a bank
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building
in the center of the
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left
side of the picture, and in 2012 a new
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building
was built
in its place. The bank
was demolished
. The hospital area was
also
built larger.
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The
place did not
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change
.
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The
cinema
was replaced
by a
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teate
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building
. Large supermarkets
were created
instead
of shops.
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Cafe
and park areas were
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destroyed
and replaced by hotels and golf courses. The main street remained the same in 2012 as it was
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before
. The location of the library has not
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changed
at all.

IELTS essay The picture describe the city Frenton was like in 1990 and modernized in 2012

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
126 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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