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The picture describe the city Frenton was like in 1990 and modernized in 2012

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This picture shows what the city of Frenton was like in 1990 and modernized in 2012. Overall, it is clear that Frenton had fewee tree and more buildings appeared than 32 years ago Previously, there was a bank building in the center of the left side of the picture, and in 2012 a new building was built in its place. The bank was demolished. The hospital area was also built larger. The place did not change. The cinema was replaced by a teate building. Large supermarkets were created instead of shops. Cafe and park areas were destroyed and replaced by hotels and golf courses. The main street remained the same in 2012 as it was before. The location of the library has not changed at all.

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Frenton
 was like in 1990 and modernized in 2012.

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Frenton
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buildings
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building
 in the center of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of the picture, and in 2012 a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
building
was built
 in its place. The bank was demolished
. The hospital area was also
 built larger. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
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change
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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. Large supermarkets were created
instead
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 and park areas were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
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before
. The location of the library has not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 at all. 