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Some people think The choices of people nowadays enhance but other group believe in another way.

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Around the globe - in particular- recent years a classification of human-being strongly believe that adolescent should be allowed to solve their problems as well such as food, cloth. On the hand, other group evidently think that this phenomenon that youngsters must decide there vital things that there are effective them accurately. Therefore, in this essay I shall appeal to a number of studies that flawlessly discuss both point of view properly.

Around the globe Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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in particular
- recent years a classification of human-being strongly
 believe that adolescent should be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to solve their problems as well
 such as food, cloth. On the hand, other group evidently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that this phenomenon that youngsters This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 decide there vital things that there are effective them accurately
. Therefore
, in this essay I shall appeal to a number of studies that flawlessly
 discuss both point of view properly
. 

IELTS essay Some people think The choices of people nowadays enhance but other group believe in another way.

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

72 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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