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The person you impressed with

The person you impressed with 706qb

Everyone have their one or maybe thousand people to impressed with, but mine is just only one person is my mother. She is my ideal model, in both work and family. First of all, my mother is not only a mom but she also is a friend that we can confide, a chief, architect and a wonder woman. Although her work busy, she always got home on time and make sure that we have been well fed. And when something in my home damaged she will fix it and make it new in no time, just like magic. Second, her career is unquestionable, always wanted to study as high as possible is what I am very impressed with. She known to treat kindly with everyone else and that is why everyone loved her. Finally, she always love me for who I am, not mattered that I am disruptive or have a bad point, she always forgive me and tell me trying hard the next time. My mother is always and the only person I love the most and impressed the most.

Everyone The pronoun 'Everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "has", "had".hashad
have
 their one or maybe thousand This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to impressed with, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 mine is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one person is my mother. She is my ideal model, in both work and family. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, my mother is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a mom This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 she also
 is a friend that we can confide, a chief, architect and a wonder woman. Although her work busy, she always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 home on time and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure that we have been This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-fed
well fed
. And when something in my home damaged she will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 it and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it new in no time, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 like magic. Second, her career is unquestionable, always wanted to study as high as possible is what I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 impressed with. She Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean "knew"?knew
known
 to treat kindly with everyone else and that is
 why everyone This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 her. Finally
, she always The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "loves", "loved".lovesloved
love
 me for who I am, not mattered that I am disruptive or have a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 point, she always The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "forgives", "forgave".forgivesforgave
forgive
 me and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me trying This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 the next
 time. My mother is always and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 person I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 the most and impressed the most. 