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Describe how you spent your last vacation

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Last summer I went to mountains located in Namangan region 1 hour away from home accompanied with my friends. From early morning at 6 o’clock on Sunday we, me and four of my friends, gathered at the local market where we made shopping buying some food products and necessary items for our journey. After that we went towards the mountains. What is most enjoyable for me was listening to our favourite songs on the player of the car increasing the volume to maximum. Spending right 1 hour on the way we finally reached the destination. One of my friend booked a villa for rent earlier a few days ago via the Internet. That’s why we did not lose time to find a better place for staying. Just after loading off our luggages we had a quick breakfast and immediately directed to the mountains for hiking. All were worn in sporty clothes in order to be comfortable when climbing to mountains like sneakers, t-shirt and shorts for being flexible in movements. I was trying to inhale the fresh air fully. People in cities like us are breathing from relatively polluted air. It is a good chance to take a break from city life when you go outside to suburban areas on journey.
Last summer I went to
mountains
located in
Namangan
region 1 hour away from home
accompanied with
my friends. From early morning at 6 o’clock on Sunday we, me and four of my friends, gathered at the local market where we made shopping buying
some
food products and necessary items for our journey.
After
that we went towards the
mountains
. What is most enjoyable for me was listening to our
favourite
songs on the player of the car increasing the volume to maximum. Spending right 1 hour on the way we
finally
reached the destination. One of my friend booked a villa for rent earlier a few days ago via the Internet. That’s why we did not lose time to find a better place for staying.
Just
after loading off our
luggages
we had a quick breakfast and immediately directed to the
mountains
for hiking. All
were worn
in sporty clothes in order to be comfortable when climbing to
mountains
like sneakers, t-shirt and shorts for being flexible in movements. I was trying to inhale the fresh air
fully
.
People
in cities like us are breathing from
relatively
polluted air. It is a
good
chance to take a break from city life when you go outside to suburban areas on journey.
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IELTS essay Describe how you spent your last vacation

Essay
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1 paragraphs
211 words
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