Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

the perfect way for the government to improve the environment

the perfect way for the government to improve the environment KyMxN

If you ask people in my country about the perfect way for the government to improve the environment, they would give different answers. Some might say that the best way is to reduce the construction of new factories; some others might opt for building more green areas such as park. As for me, I tend to believe that the best way for the government of my country to improve the environment is to enhance public transportation. I feel this way for two reasons which I would explore on what follows. The primary reason why I am supporting my idea lies in the fact that by using more of public transportation, people use more less of their own vehicles, and because of that people can save more money. In other words, because of this activity people are able to spend more money on other useful actions such as growing numerous new plants in their gardens and in front of their homes. As a result, this activity can help community to have a more beautiful environment and attractive perspective. Another subtle point is that by using of public transportation including: bus, taxi, and subway government can decrease traffic, air pollution, and noise pollution. Indeed, we will have a better air quality and a quieter atmosphere in the community. Therefore, we will provide some more suitable conditions to increase animals breeding and growing new plants. Furthermore, less noise pollution can help people to have much less stress and they will be more calm and health, mentally and physically. Generally, all these activities and their achievements help people to have a better environment. According to the reasons have been discussed in the preceding paragraphs, it can be claimed that an advanced and well-equipped public transportation can help a government to build a better society.

If you ask You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in my country about the perfect way for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the environment, they would give This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 answers. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 might say that the best way is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the construction of new factories; This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 others might opt for building more green areas such as park. As for me, I tend to believe that the best way for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 of my country to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the environment is to enhance You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportshipmentshipping
transportation
. I feel this way for two reasons which I would explore on what follows.

The primary reason why I am supporting my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 lies in the fact that by using more of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportshipmentshipping
transportation
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
Use only "less" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.less
more less
 of their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 vehicles, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can save more money. In other words
, because of this
 activity You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 are able to spend more money on other useful actions such as growing numerous new plants in their gardens and in front of their homes. As a result
, this activity can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
 community to have a more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 environment and attractive perspective.

Another subtle point is that by using of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportshipmentshipping
transportation
 including: bus, taxi, and subway You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 can decrease traffic, air pollution, and noise pollution. Indeed
, we will have a better air quality and a quieter atmosphere in the community. Therefore
, we will provide This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 more suitable conditions to increase animals breeding and growing new plants. Furthermore
, less noise pollution can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to have much less Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).stress, and
stress and
 they will be more calm and health, mentally and physically
. Generally
, all these activities and their achievements You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to have a better environment.

According to the reasons have been discussed
 in the preceding paragraphs, it can be claimed
 that an advanced and well-equipped You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportshipmentshipping
transportation
 can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 to build a better society. 