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Line chart showing trends in age and type

Line chart showing trends in age and type BgNOV
The given line charts show the urban and rural population growth and trends as per age groups plotted against a timeline from 1950 to 2040. The horizontal axis is divided into increments of 10 years and the vertical axis measures population in millions. In the urban and rural population chart, the urban demographic growth is more steep than the rural rise. Urban population has grown from around 5 million in 1950 to about 25 million right now with an estimate of almost 35 million in the year 2040. The rural population line has stayed almost steady within 3-7 million mark. The total population, which was about 10 million in 1950 is predicted to be over 40 million in 2040. In the age trends chart, age-group 15-65 has had the sharpest rise. It was a little over 5 million at the start of the timeline and is expected to cap at about 35 million in the year 2040. The other age groups, namely under 15 and over 65, are both static at around the 5 million mark. Overall, the highest difference observed in both urban vs rural trends and age trends is around 30 million over a ninety year period.
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population
growth and
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as per
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age
groups plotted against a timeline from 1950 to 2040. The horizontal axis
is divided
into increments of 10 years and the vertical axis measures
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population
in millions.

In the
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urban
and
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rural
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chart, the
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demographic growth is
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more steep
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rural
rise.
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Urban
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population
has grown from around 5
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million
in 1950 to about 25
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million
right
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now
with an estimate of almost 35
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million
in the
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year
2040. The
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rural
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population
line has stayed almost steady within 3-7
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million
mark. The total
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population
, which was about 10
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million
in 1950
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40
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million
in 2040.

In the
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age
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chart, age-group 15-65 has had the sharpest rise. It was a
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5
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at the
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start
of the timeline and is
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expected
to cap at about 35
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million
in the
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2040. The other
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groups,
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65, are both static at around the 5
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Overall
, the highest difference observed in both
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vs
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and
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age
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is around 30
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million
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a ninety
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IELTS essay Line chart showing trends in age and type

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
199 words
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