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The percentage of men's who studing in England from2000 to 2001.

The percentage of men's who studing in England from2000 to 2001. xOYa9
The given piecharts manifest the percentage of males who doing study in England in2000and 2001. Overal; it is lucid that the dominant proposition of youngsters were observed in 2001who has been done study and least can be said in 2001. Having a glance, the highest percentage of males who were doing study in England was 18 in initial year but it was declined in last year. 25% young were studing in 2000 but this figure was inclined in 2001. There was 18%males who taught in first year but it was surg in last year. Analysing the further statement, as compared to the former year, 14%more youngster which studied in latter year. The percentage of males were 10%and15% in 2000 and 2001respectively. The percentile of youth was stood at 10%.
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2001who
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, 14%more youngster which studied in latter
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. The percentage of
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were 10%and15% in 2000 and
2001respectively
. The percentile of youth
was stood
at 10%.
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IELTS essay The percentage of men's who studing in England from2000 to 2001.

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