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the percent of abortion significantly rises and this subject also is debated in the social.

the percent of abortion significantly rises and this subject also is debated in the social. Ew6ER
in the present day, the percent of abortion significantly rises and this subject also is debated in the social. these persons give idea should be allowed as the law but other people have opposite notions. In my opinion, both legal and illegal have some the reasons to accept in this limit. In the essay, I will explain my argument to support my view. On the one hand, if the abortion is performed with to purpose humanitarian, it should be allowed as a law. However, it needs to have clear regulations on how is humanitarian. It is the base on that the authority can manage abortion easily. For instance, in the case the fetus has malformation. If it gives birth to, it will have many diseases. besides, the life of an infant is affected serious On the other hand, in some cases, the abortion does not allow to prevent increasing abortion. Firstly, the abortion in order to choose the sex that the parents want to born their infant is male or female. The phenomenon can lead to serious problems as dramatically different sex in the community or in the country. in fact, the number of man higher woman many times which we witnessed in China. Secondly, some couple or teenagers has fetus that they do not expect it and they can be given up it easy at the hospital or private medical. In addition, the abortion also effect to serious healthy women In conclusion, the abortion can both allow and not allow that belongs in some cases. That should be clearly regulated in the law
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in
the present day, the percent of
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abortion
significantly
rises and this subject
also
is debated
in the social.
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these
persons give
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idea
should be
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allowed
as the law
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but
other
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people
have opposite notions. In my opinion, both legal and illegal have
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some
the reasons to accept in this limit. In the essay, I will
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explain
my argument to support my view.

On the one hand, if the
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abortion
is performed
with to purpose humanitarian, it should be
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allowed
as a law.
However
, it needs to have
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clear
regulations on how is humanitarian. It is the base on that the authority can manage
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abortion
easily
.
For instance
, in the case the fetus has malformation. If it gives birth to, it will have
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many
diseases.
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besides
, the life of an infant is
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affected
serious

On the other hand
, in
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some
cases, the
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abortion
does not
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allow
to
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prevent
increasing
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abortion
.
Firstly
, the
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abortion
in order to choose the sex that the parents want to
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born
their infant is male or female. The phenomenon can lead to serious problems as
dramatically
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different
sex in the community or in the country.
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in
fact, the number of
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man
higher woman
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many
times which we witnessed in China.
Secondly
,
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some
couple or
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teenagers
has fetus that they do not
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expect
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it and
they can be
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given
up it easy at the hospital or private medical.
In addition
, the
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abortion
also
effect to serious healthy women

In conclusion
, the
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abortion
can both
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allow
and not
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allow
that belongs in
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some
cases. That should be
clearly
regulated in the
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law
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IELTS essay the percent of abortion significantly rises and this subject also is debated in the social.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
263 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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