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The two pictures illustrate a park when it opened in 1920 and today. Overall, every feature of the park has been changed except for the entrances and one of the three rose gardens.

The two pictures illustrate a park when it opened in 1920 and today. Overall, every feature of the park has been changed except for the entrances and one of the three rose gardens. AwQWn

The two pictures illustrate a park when it opened in 1920 and today. Overall, every feature of the park has been changed except for the entrances and one of the three rose gardens. Looking first at the far left side of the image, the seats and music stage have been converted into a large amphitheatre with stadium-like seating. In the centre of the park, the two entrances remain the same, but the water fountain has been transformed into a rectangular-shaped rose garden with seating around each side. Turning to the far-right side of the plans, the pond has become a play area for children and the glasshouse is now a water feature. Below the water feature, an underground parking area has been built and this can be accessed by turning left off Eldon Street. Next to the entrance on Arnold Avenue, the rose garden has been replaced with a café.

The two pictures illustrate a park when it opened in 1920 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. Overall
, every feature of the park has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 the entrances and one of the three rose gardens.

Looking first
 at the far This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of the image, the seats and music stage have been converted
 into a large Possible spelling mistake. 'amphitheatre' is British English.amphitheater
amphitheatre
 with stadium-like seating. In the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of the park, the two entrances remain the same, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the water fountain has been transformed
 into a rectangular-shaped rose garden with seating around each side.

Turning to the far-right side of the plans, the pond has become a play area for children and the glasshouse is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 a water feature. Below the water feature, an underground parking area has been built
 and this can be accessed
 by turning This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 off Eldon Street. Next
 to the entrance on Arnold Avenue, the rose garden has been replaced
 with a café. 