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The passage and the lecture offer two opposing views regarding fourday workweek policy. while the text states that the fourday workweek would increase the productivity of the employees and would increase the profit of the companies, the professor thinks it would increase the unemployment rate and would reduce the quality of living of the employees. first, the passage states that the profits of the companies would increase by offering a fourday workweek to the employees. However, the professor thinks that the companies would have to spent more if they offer fourday workweek to their emplyees which will cut down the profit. although the passage states that fourday workweek would enable the company to hire more workers to maintain the same amount of work, according to the professor it would cause additional cost because the companies would need to spent money after training new employees and their medical facilites. besides the companies would need more space to accomodate additional staffs and would require to buy more computers for them which would cut down the benefit earned. Secondly, the professors refutes the idea of the passage which states that the fourday workweek policy would reduce unemployment rates. he thinks the companies would prefer to force the workers to do the same amount of work within the fourday workweek which they used to do within a fiveday workweek and as a result no new job opportunities for the unemployed ones would be created. besides, he states his concern regarding the promotion of the fourday workweek employees and according to him employees which work fivedays in a week would get prefernece while getting promotion. Finally, the reading gives an idea that fourday workweek would reduce burden from the employees and would give them an opportunoity to enjoy their lives. Contrary to the passage, the professor thinks fourday workweek would make their career unstable. although the passage states that the quality of living would be improved by the new policy, the professor thinks that it would do the opposite as because the employees would be paid lesser amount of money. Editionally, the professors thinks that fourday workweek employees would be the first one who would loose jobs during a recesion time.
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fourday
workweek policy.
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while
the text
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states
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fourday
workweek would
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increase
the productivity of the
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employees
and would
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increase
the profit of the
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companies
, the
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professor
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thinks
it would
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increase
the unemployment rate and would
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reduce
the quality of living of the employees.

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first
, the
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passage
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states
that the profits of the
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companies
would
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increase
by offering a
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fourday
workweek to the
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employees
.
However
, the
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professor
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thinks
that the
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companies
would
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have to
spent more if they offer
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fourday
workweek to their
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emplyees
which will
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cut
down the profit.
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although
the
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passage
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states
that
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fourday
workweek would enable the
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company
to hire more workers to maintain the same amount of work, according to the
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professor
it would cause additional cost
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because
the
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companies
would need to spent money after training new
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employees
and their medical
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facilites
.
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besides
the
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companies
would need more space to
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accomodate
additional staffs and would require to
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buy
more computers for them which would
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cut
down the benefit earned.

Secondly
, the
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professors
refutes the
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idea
of the
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passage
which
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states
that the
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fourday
workweek policy would
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reduce
unemployment rates.
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he
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thinks
the
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companies
would prefer to force the workers to do the same amount of work within the
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fourday
workweek which they
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used
to do within a
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fiveday
workweek and
as a result
no new job opportunities for the unemployed ones would
be created
.
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besides
, he
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states
his concern regarding the promotion of the
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fourday
workweek
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employees
and according to him
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employees
which work
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fivedays
in a week would
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get
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prefernece
while getting promotion.

Finally
, the reading gives an
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idea
that
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fourday
workweek would
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reduce
burden from the
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employees
and would give them an
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opportunoity
to enjoy their
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lives
. Contrary to the
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passage
, the
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professor
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thinks
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fourday
workweek would
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make
their career unstable.
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although
the
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passage
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states
that the quality of living would be
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improved
by the new policy, the
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professor
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thinks
that it would do the opposite as
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because
the
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employees
would
be paid
lesser amount of money.
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Editionally
, the
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professors
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thinks
that
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fourday
workweek
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employees
would be the
first
one who would
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loose
jobs during a
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recesion
time.
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IELTS essay The passage and the lecture offer two opposing views regarding fourday workweek policy.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
366 words
5.5
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