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Passage illustrates the importance of urban forest.

Passage illustrates the importance of urban forest. YL30N
Passage illustrates the importance of urban forest. Forest can be saved by using legislation. While lecture states that in past such program was not successful. Speaker casts doubt on author in regards to urban forest legislation and points in the passage by giving specific examples and reasons. Firstly, he points out that as per the author laws should be enforced on development. Mature trees should be saved by law. According to speaker this is misconception, in reality, in past law was not much successful. Reasons behind this was complicated language of law. this was not understood by community. Consequently, legislation was not applied properly. Thus he unequivocally negates the information of passage. Secondly, the speaker opposes the information given by author regarding collection of funds. To maintain forest of city funds needed. This should by collected from people in the form of tax increase as well as private fund collection. This is quiet contrary, speaker reminds that in past low funds were generated from privet donation. Furthermore increase in tax will be helpful. We should work on it. Thirdly, he denies validity of the point that was averred in the passage. Public should be aware regarding benefits and importance. Benefits like enhancing area and because of that pollution will be reduced. Speaker contradicts by saying that, this method will be successful if it implied correctly. Details of benefits should be reached to public. Hence in conclusion, after this holistic analysis, speaker lucidly substantiates his points of view with cogency.
Passage illustrates the importance of urban
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
forest
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Forest
can
be saved
by using legislation.
“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
lecture states that in past such program was not successful. Speaker casts doubt on author
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
urban
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
forest
legislation and
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points
in the passage by giving specific examples and reasons.

Firstly
, he
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
points
out that as per the author
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
should
be enforced
on development. Mature trees should
be saved
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
. According to speaker this is misconception, in reality, in past
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
was not much successful. Reasons behind this
was complicated
language of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
this
was not understood by community.
Consequently
, legislation was not applied
properly
.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Thus
he
unequivocally
negates the information of passage.

Secondly
, the speaker opposes the information
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
by author regarding collection of funds. To maintain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
forest
of city funds needed. This should
Did you maybe mean "buy" or "be"?
by
collected from
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in the form of tax increase
as well
as private
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fund
collection. This is
Did you mean "quite"? 'quiet' means 'silent', 'quite' mean 'very' or 'to a moderate extent'
quiet
contrary, speaker reminds that in past low funds
were generated
from privet donation.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Furthermore
increase in tax will be helpful. We should work on it.

Thirdly
, he denies validity of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
point
that
was averred
in the passage. Public should be aware regarding benefits and importance. Benefits like enhancing area and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of that pollution will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
. Speaker contradicts by saying that, this method will be successful if it implied
correctly
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Details
of benefits should
be reached
to public.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Hence
in conclusion
, after this holistic analysis, speaker
lucidly
substantiates his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
points
of view with cogency.
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IELTS essay Passage illustrates the importance of urban forest.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
249 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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