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The article and the lecturer both discuss about the painting made by the dutch painter "Remembrandt", which is known as "Potrait of an Elderly women in a white bonnet".

The article and the lecturer both discuss about the painting made by the dutch painter " Remembrandt" , which is known as " Potrait of an Elderly women in a white bonnet" . qVDXX
The article and the lecturer both discuss about the painting made by the dutch painter " Remembrandt" , which is known as " Potrait of an Elderly women in a white bonnet" . The article mentions that the painting was not originally painted by the remembrandt. However, the lecturer refutes this by mentioning few points which is discussed below. First, the reading mentions about the fur collar of women, which indicates luxury in the painting. But, the remembrandt paints follows perfect details, so claiming that this painting is not a work of him. The lecture refutes this point. The researchers have concluded that the fur collar was added up to the painting after 100 years to enhance the look of the women in the painting. Additionally, the added fur collar is not in the light shade. Because of its dark shade which absorbs light, completely eliminates the face. When it is painted in the light shade, the face could be reflective. Finally, the author argues about the panel that was made by gluing several pieces of wood. But, the lecture says, the wood was added to the wood panel, while adding the fur collar to the painting. To improve the quality and the value of painting, several wood were added to the original panel. However, the original panel was examined and found out that it is the wood which was used by the remembrandt in other paintings. This contradicts the doubt regarding the panel.
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Potrait
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The article mentions that the
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painting
was not
originally
painted by the
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remembrandt
.
However
, the lecturer refutes this by mentioning few points which
is discussed
below.

First
, the reading
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mentions about the
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fur
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collar
of women, which indicates luxury in the
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painting
.
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, the
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remembrandt
paints follows perfect
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details
,
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so
claiming that this
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painting
is not a work of him. The lecture refutes this point. The researchers have concluded that the
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fur
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collar
was
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added
up to the
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painting
after 100 years to enhance the look of the women in the painting.

Additionally
, the
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added
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fur
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collar
is not in the light shade.
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Because
of its dark shade which absorbs light, completely eliminates the face. When it
is painted
in the light shade, the face could be reflective.

Finally
, the author argues about the
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panel
that
was made
by gluing several pieces of
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wood
.
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But
, the lecture says, the
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wood
was
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added
to the
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wood
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panel
, while adding the
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fur
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collar
to the
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painting
. To
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improve
the quality and the value of
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painting
, several
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wood
were
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added
to the original
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panel
.
However
, the original
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panel
was examined
and found out that it is the
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wood
which was
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used
by the
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remembrandt
in other
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paintings
. This contradicts the doubt regarding the
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panel
.
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IELTS essay The article and the lecturer both discuss about the painting made by the dutch painter " Remembrandt" , which is known as " Potrait of an Elderly women in a white bonnet" .

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