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The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. RxAW
Nowadays, we can see plenty of cars on the road, Therefore, writer suggest that, It is better to have a single person ownership of car per family so, we can mitigate a number of problems such as traffic jam and contamination in the city. I completely agree with this option as it will be a worth suggestion in order to minimize some of major issues related to traffic. I would like to draw an attention that, on the road most of accidents happened due to the number of cars having on the road. Most of the time we spend in the traffic as it's heavy increase in the cars in our cities. Because of this, our daily time planning affects as it will be mandetory to get up early in the morning to reach at our office or business or school on time. In addition, we have faced that, if you are in emergency or any ambulance got stuck on the road then, it will create disaster on the road. So this can be resolve through less numbers of car on the road. As long as the car increase, we also measure increment in pollution such as air or noise pollution. It is often said by doctors that, these pollution start drawing major disease related to breathing and it effects on lungs. For example, cities like Mumbai and Delhi, day by day many people faces lungs issues due to heavy congestion in traffic on the road as there is a more than one person has the ownership of the car in single family. To conclude, Traffic issues and pollution problems only be minimize by taking some of step such as single person ownership in one house or by not allowing single person travelling in car with the help of strict rule of Government Authorities.
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,
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single
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person
ownership of
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car
per family
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, we can mitigate a number of problems such as
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traffic
jam and contamination in the city. I completely
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agree
with this option as it will be a worth suggestion in order to minimize
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of major issues related to traffic.

I would like to draw an attention that, on the
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road
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most of accidents
happened due to the number of
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cars
having on the
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road
. Most of the time we spend in the
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traffic
as
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it's heavy increase
in the
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cars
in our cities.
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, our daily time planning affects as it will be
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up early in the morning to reach at our office or business or school on time.
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, we have faced that, if you are in emergency or any ambulance
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then, it will create disaster on the
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.
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this can be
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through
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numbers of
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car
on the road.

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car
increase, we
also
measure increment in
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pollution
such as air or noise
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pollution
. It is
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often
said by doctors that, these
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pollution
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drawing major disease related to breathing and it effects on lungs.
For example
, cities like Mumbai and Delhi, day by day
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people
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faces
lungs issues due to heavy congestion in
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traffic
on the
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road
as there is a more than one
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person
has the ownership of the
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car
in
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single
family.

To conclude
,
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Traffic
issues and
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pollution
problems
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by taking
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person
ownership in one
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or by not allowing
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travelling in
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car
with the
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help
of strict
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rule
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Government
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IELTS essay The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
6.0
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