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The only things people are interested in today is earning more money

The only things people are interested in today is earning more money 969oX

We as human live in materialistic society and learn to be acquisitive. When a person reaches that age to earn life and love, try to earn more and more money to get married. Nowadays, people try to earn money. They compare their lives with neighbor. If their neighbor purchases a TV, he buys a bigger one. If he gets a car, his neighbor gets two cars, ones for his woman and another for himself. Big companies well know about competition between community members. They try to build best appliance with high prices. These manufacturers pay high paycheck to genius people who improve and upgrade their products. Then poor society face with brain drain. In these nations, poor people become poorer and rich people become richer.

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live
 in materialistic society and learn to be acquisitive. When a person reaches that age to earn life and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
, try to earn more and more money to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 married. Nowadays, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 try to earn money. They compare their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 with neighbor. If their neighbor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
purchases
 a TV, he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchases
buys
 a bigger one. If he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 a car, his neighbor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 two cars, ones for his woman and another for himself. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
Big
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companies
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build best
 appliance with high prices. These manufacturers pay high paycheck to genius You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 and upgrade their products. Then poor society face with brain drain. In these nations, poor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 become poorer and rich You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 become richer. 