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the process below about the life cycle of the frog.

the process below about the life cycle of the frog. 869kr

The picture gives information about the life cycle of the frog. Overall, there is a total of 11 different steps, from the eggs stage to the development a fully- grown frog. The first step is that adult frog lays a lot of eggs, which then develop into embryos. After that, tadpoles come out of eggs and cling to water-plant. To support for their life in the water, external gills appear for breathing while the tail grows out for swimming. Subsequently, hindlegs emerge when these baby frogs are nourished from the foods stored in the tail. they continue to grow until the front legs appear while their tails become shorter and they start moving on land. . In the next stage, the tail gradually disappears and becomes a baby frog. Finally, over time, young frogs grow into adults. The cycle will then continue again

The picture gives information about the life cycle of the frog.

Overall
, there is a total of 11 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 steps, from the eggs stage to the development a fully
- grown frog.

The first
 step is that adult You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoad
frog
 lays This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 eggs, which then develop into embryos. After that, tadpoles This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 out of eggs and cling to water-plant. To support for their life in the water, external gills appear for breathing while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrear endrearbuttrudder
tail
 grows out for swimming. Subsequently
, Possible spelling mistake found.hind legs
hindlegs
 emerge when these baby You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoad
frogs
are nourished
 from the foods stored in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrear endrearbuttrudder
tail
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThey
they
 continue to grow until the front legs appear while their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrear endrearbuttrudder
tails
 become Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).shorter, and
shorter and
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 moving on land. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 In the next
 stage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrear endrearbuttrudder
tail
gradually
 disappears and becomes a baby You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoad
frog
. Finally
, over time, young You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtoad
frogs
 grow into adults. The cycle will then continue Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphagain.again!again?again:again,again;
again