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the process below about the life cycle of the frog.

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The picture gives information about the life cycle of the frog. Overall, there is a total of 11 different steps, from the eggs stage to the development a fully- grown frog. The first step is that adult frog lays a lot of eggs, which then develop into embryos. After that, tadpoles come out of eggs and cling to water-plant. To support for their life in the water, external gills appear for breathing while the tail grows out for swimming. Subsequently, hindlegs emerge when these baby frogs are nourished from the foods stored in the tail. they continue to grow until the front legs appear while their tails become shorter and they start moving on land. . In the next stage, the tail gradually disappears and becomes a baby frog. Finally, over time, young frogs grow into adults. The cycle will then continue again
The picture gives information about the life cycle of the frog.

Overall
, there is a total of 11
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different
steps, from the eggs stage to the development a
fully
- grown frog.

The
first
step is that adult
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frog
lays
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a lot of
eggs, which then develop into embryos. After that, tadpoles
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come
out of eggs and cling to water-plant. To support for their life in the water, external gills appear for breathing while the
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tail
grows out for swimming.
Subsequently
,
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hindlegs
emerge when these baby
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frogs
are nourished
from the foods stored in the
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tail
.
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they
continue to grow until the front legs appear while their
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tails
become
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shorter and
they
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start
moving on land.
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.
In the
next
stage, the
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tail
gradually
disappears and becomes a baby
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frog
.
Finally
, over time, young
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frogs
grow into adults. The cycle will then continue
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IELTS essay the process below about the life cycle of the frog.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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