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“The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education” Einstein. Discuss this quote.

“The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education” Einstein. Discuss this quote. GMW6m
Education is a systematic process of learning new subjects whether it is important or non important. Many argues that learning should be interest oriented which do not require to study all the subjects and some believes that knowledge of all subjects are required in education system. I will give my opinion in upcoming paragraphs with examples. To begin with traditional method of education, in this method of learning people need to learn all the subjects compulsory to throughout. There are enormous benefits of learning all the subjects which improves knowledge of all subjects and one can speak on any subject with interest. For example, scientist have a knowledge of science but if they do not have knowledge of math than science does not work alone. Both subjects knowledge require simultaneously so inn traditional education system gives same weightage to all subjects so it will become compulsion to complete the same. Furthermore, in modern education system individual can select any one or two subject in which they are interested so one can focus on that and complete master degree but it does not work at final stage. For instance, for running pharma or any sector specific company one need to have knowledge of economy as well as pharma and any specific sector which interferes in learning. In a nutshell, with multiple study of subject interferes learning in education.
Education
is a systematic process of
learning
new
subjects
whether it is
important
or non
important
.
Many
argues that
learning
should be interest oriented which do not require to study all the
subjects
and
some
believes that
knowledge
of all
subjects
are required
in
education
system. I will give my opinion in upcoming paragraphs with examples.

To
begin
with traditional method of
education
, in this method of
learning
people
need to learn all the
subjects
compulsory to throughout. There are enormous benefits of
learning
all the
subjects
which
improves
knowledge
of all
subjects
and one can speak on any
subject
with interest.
For example
, scientist have a
knowledge
of science
but
if they do not have
knowledge
of math than science does not work alone. Both
subjects
knowledge
require
simultaneously
so
inn traditional
education
system gives same weightage to all
subjects
so
it will become compulsion to complete the same.

Furthermore
, in modern
education
system individual can select
any one
or two
subject
in which they
are interested
so
one can focus on that and complete master degree
but
it does not work at final stage.
For instance
, for running pharma or any sector specific
company
one need to have
knowledge
of economy
as well
as pharma and any specific sector which interferes in learning.

In a nutshell, with multiple study of
subject
interferes
learning
in
education
.
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IELTS essay “The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education” Einstein. Discuss this quote.

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