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What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years，antibiotics, airplane, or computers? And why?

What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years，antibiotics, airplane, or computers? And why? 2bPkb

It is irrefutable to say the world has benefitted immensely in the last century because of the technological advancement. Not only in medical but the technical achievement cannot be ignored either. In this following essay I will be discussing about the salient discoveries concerning about the technical advancements and deduce to a conclusion after mentioning its boon in the modern society. To begin with, we have used computes for multitasking purposes from many years now, whether its home, schools or banks its use has overgrown tremendously, because of its accuracy and efficiency. For instance, tedious mathematical problems, or the records of employee in organization or the paperless transactions, only because of the computers one can achieve those. So, there are immense propitious of computers. Furthermore, computes with the programmable software, internet, and addition of artificial intelligence has created technological revolution. For instance, according to the New York Times billions of dollars are invested in Silicon Valley for development of new technology. The repercussion of that has resulted in colossal technical advancement, which has made world a better place to live. To recapitulate, it’s not an easy task to judge any invention, but the computers with integration of programmable software has contributed in medical and making advancement in the airline sector immensely. Undoubtedly, computes are one of the best inventions so far.

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