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The number of hot-dogs consumed at Eric's flat

The number of hot-dogs consumed at Eric's flat 2r3n6
The number of hot-dogs consumed at Eric's flat. There was little growth in April and it was back to normal. At may it stood at 500 and doubled over the next 1 month to level off at 400 and remained costant untile june. However there will be a rapid fall in to 1 month and it will reach 300. There were some fluctuations in the number of hot dogs between 200 and 300 in early august before dropped significantly in late august
The number of hot-dogs consumed at Eric's flat. There was
little
growth in April and it was back to normal. At
may it
stood at 500 and doubled over the
next
1 month to level off at 400 and remained
costant
untile
june
.
However
there will be a rapid fall in to 1 month and it will reach 300. There were
some
fluctuations in the number of hot dogs between 200 and 300 in early
august
before
dropped
significantly
in late
august
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IELTS essay The number of hot-dogs consumed at Eric's flat

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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5.0
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