Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The number of hot-dogs consumed at Eric's flat

The number of hot-dogs consumed at Eric's flat 2r3n6

The number of hot-dogs consumed at Eric's flat. There was little growth in April and it was back to normal. At may it stood at 500 and doubled over the next 1 month to level off at 400 and remained costant untile june. However there will be a rapid fall in to 1 month and it will reach 300. There were some fluctuations in the number of hot dogs between 200 and 300 in early august before dropped significantly in late august

The number of hot-dogs consumed at Eric's flat. There was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 growth in April and it was back to normal. At The comma is probably missing here: "may, it".may, it
may it
 stood at 500 and doubled over the next
 1 month to level off at 400 and remained Possible spelling mistake found.constantcost ant
costant
Possible spelling mistake found.untiluntieutileuntil eunpile
untile
Possible spelling mistake found.JunetuneJaneJunJungJuno
june
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 there will be a rapid fall in to 1 month and it will reach 300. There were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fluctuations in the number of hot dogs between 200 and 300 in early The month "August" needs to be capitalized.August
august
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 dropped significantly
 in late The month "August" needs to be capitalized.August
august

IELTS essay The number of hot-dogs consumed at Eric's flat

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

81 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
?
One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
?
Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Labels Descriptions

?
Currently is not available
Meet the criteria
Doesn't meet the criteria