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The number of computers terminals available to students in different faculties of a university.

Jadvalda universitetning turli bo'limlari talabalari uchun ajratilgan kompyuterlar soni to'g'risida ma'lumotlar keltirilgan. Tabiatshunoslik fakulteti talabalari ko'proq kompyuterlarga ega bo'lish baxtiga muyassar bo'lganligi, ta'lim sohasida tahsil olayotgan talabalar kompyuter terminallarini tarqatishidan g'ururlanmaganliklari darhol ko'rinib turibdi. Bu aniq universitet talabalarining butun soni shunchaki2. 900 yoshgacha, shundan 240 ta eng past kompyuterlari bo'lgan qishloq xo'jaligi fakultetiga tegishli, talabalar soni teng bo'lgan fan bo'limi esa eng ko'p kompyuter tarmoqlariga ega. Keyinchalik, universitet talabalarining uchdan bir qismidan kamrog'io'qitiladi eng yuqori farq bilan ta'lim fakultetida faqat36 o'quvchiga bitta kompyuter. Garchi muhandislik talabalari ta'limni o'rganayotganlarga qaraganda uch baravar kam bo'lsa-da, ularetkazib beriladi ko'proq kompyuter terminallari bilan, tarqatish bilan 1 dan 8 gacha. Shundan so'ng huquqshunoslik fakultetining 11 nafar talabasi majburiyatni bajarishi kerak foydalanish san'at fakultetidagi yuridik talabalarga qaraganda ikki baravar ko'p kompyuterlar bilan ta'minlanganiga nisbatan bitta kompyuter.

Jadvalda universitetning turli bo'limlari talabalari uchun ajratilgan kompyuterlar soni to'g'risida ma'lumotlar keltirilgan. Tabiatshunoslik fakulteti talabalari ko'proq kompyuterlarga ega bo'lish baxtiga muyassar bo'lganligi, ta'lim sohasida tahsil olayotgan talabalar kompyuter terminallarini tarqatishidan g'ururlanmaganliklari darhol ko'rinib turibdi.

Bu aniq universitet talabalarining butun soni shunchaki2. 900 yoshgacha, shundan 240 ta eng past kompyuterlari bo'lgan qishloq xo'jaligi fakultetiga tegishli, talabalar soni teng bo'lgan fan bo'limi esa eng ko'p kompyuter tarmoqlariga ega. Keyinchalik, universitet talabalarining uchdan bir qismidan kamrog'io'qitiladi eng yuqori farq bilan ta'lim fakultetida faqat36 o'quvchiga bitta kompyuter. Garchi muhandislik talabalari ta'limni o'rganayotganlarga qaraganda uch baravar kam bo'lsa-da, ularetkazib beriladi ko'proq kompyuter terminallari bilan, tarqatish bilan 1 dan 8 gacha.

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'ng huquqshunoslik fakultetining 11 nafar talabasi majburiyatni bajarishi kerak foydalanish san'at fakultetidagi yuridik talabalarga qaraganda ikki baravar ko'p kompyuterlar bilan ta'minlanganiga nisbatan bitta kompyuter. 

IELTS essay The number of computers terminals available to students in different faculties of a university.

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