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The mother the best mom in the world

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It is the fountain of love inside her that gives her the power to work every waking moment. The selfless and pure love is the driving force. It is her unselfish love that enables her to help face the physical exhaustion. She is a blessing. The one that is considered as an epitome of selfless love, abounding care, desired sincerity, and much-needed truthfulness. These qualities of my mother make me spellbound to extol her greatness. I lack words to describe my mother. She is the kindness itself. After God, she is the most revered and dignified entity to me. My mother is both my teacher and my best friend. She laid the foundation stone of my education and taught me the skills that will help me at every walk of life. I find the best friend in my mother. She gives me her company when I face any hardship or difficulty in life. She not only helps and supports me but also encourages me to face the challenges of life boldly.
It is the fountain of
love
inside her that gives her the power to work every waking moment. The selfless and pure
love
is the driving force. It is her unselfish
love
that enables her to
help
face the physical exhaustion.

She is a blessing. The one that
is considered
as an epitome of selfless
love
, abounding care, desired sincerity, and much-needed truthfulness.

These qualities of my
mother
make
me spellbound to extol her greatness. I lack words to
describe
my
mother
. She is the kindness itself. After God, she is the most revered and dignified entity to me.

My
mother
is both my teacher and my best friend. She laid the foundation stone of my education and taught me the
skills
that will
help
me at every walk of life.

I find the best friend in my
mother
. She gives me her
company
when I face any hardship or difficulty in life. She not
only
helps
and supports me
but
also
encourages me to face the challenges of life
boldly
.
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IELTS essay The mother the best mom in the world

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
171 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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