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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most serious problems in the world will be solved during my lifetime. Use details and examples to support your answer.

In this day and age of complicated and intricate, the rapid expansion of industry and technology many problems also increasing like pollution, crime, and advanced disease. The most important problems for solving the need for a long time and for a lot of money, so they are not solved in our lifetime. In this day and age of complicated and intricate, the rapid expansion of industry and technology many problems also increasing like pollution, crime, and advanced disease. The most important problems for solving the need for a long time and for a lot of money, so they are not solved in our lifetime.
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for solving the need for a long time and for
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they are not solved in our lifetime.

In this day and age of complicated and intricate, the rapid expansion of industry and technology
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
also
increasing like pollution, crime, and advanced disease.

The most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
for solving the need for a long time and for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
money,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
they are not solved in our lifetime.

IELTS essay The most serious problems in the world will be solved during my lifetime. Use details and examples to support your answer.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
104 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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