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The most important things in life are free of any cost. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The most important things in life are free of any cost. 53DaQ
The basic and most important amenities in life are free of any cost. I agree with this statement. The basic amenities such as health-care facilities and education should be free in a country, I will be explaining both of these points in the above paragraphs. As we all know getting perfect education and health care is basic and the most important right in our country and I think this should be free and equal for every citizen of the country beat lower caste beat higher class. As our country has a lot of poverty, this idea can be very useful for reducing it. For example a dalit boy which is very excellent in studies gets a proper secondary education and gets a seat in one of the top colleges in the country and later has good paying job, he will improve the living of his lower caste family and chain furthur continues. So free education can easily decrease the poverty rate of the country. Health care facilities is another basic amenity which should be free for everyone. If the health facilities aren't free in the country it can lead to huge amount of debts for lower middle class families in India. In the current scenario, if a non wealthy person is dealing with a surgery, he or she has to pay a huge amount to hospital which can lead to debt burden on him or her. Some of the foreign countries has used this policy and made health care free such as Finland, Norway etc. To conclude, I just want to say if the government should charge nothing for basic amentites by which the worse situations can be handled in our country.
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amenities such as health-care facilities and
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should be
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in a
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, I will be explaining both of these points in the above paragraphs.

As we all know getting perfect
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education
and health care is
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and the most
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important
right in our
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country
and I
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think
this should be
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and equal for every citizen of the
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beat lower caste beat higher
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class
. As our
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has
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poverty, this
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useful for reducing it.
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boy which is
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excellent in studies
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a proper secondary
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and
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a seat in one of the top colleges in the
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country
and later has
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good
paying job, he will
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the living of his lower caste family and chain
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furthur
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So
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can
easily
decrease the poverty rate of the country.

Health care facilities is another
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basic
amenity which should be
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for everyone. If the health facilities aren't
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in the
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it can lead to huge amount of debts for lower middle
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class
families in India. In the
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scenario, if a
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non wealthy
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has to
pay a huge amount to hospital which can lead to debt burden on him or her.
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foreign
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has
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used
this policy and made health care
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such as Finland, Norway etc.

To conclude
, I
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want to say if the
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government
should charge nothing for
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by which the worse situations can
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IELTS essay The most important things in life are free of any cost.

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4 paragraphs
282 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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