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The most important knowledge does not come from books.

The most important knowledge does not come from books. LRLR
There is no denying that books are the primary source of human knowledge from the prehistory to modern society in the present-day world. By contrast, it generally seems to me that not all understandings are well achieved from books but from other means of life. The main objective in this essay is to have an obvious discussion about my perspectives on the issue mentioned. To begin with, what people know when entering life is gained initially from their family. Almost every newly-born babies have a golden opportunity to receive special care from their family members, not least their parents. In a certain period of time, the first independent steps, first spoken words of these babies will result from their family nurture. What is more, there is no wonder that family also performs an indispensable role in the child development in teaching them the requisite knowledge about their surroundings such as colour identification, numbers, and the most essential is that they are meticulously taught to become a well-behaved child towards the society in the next years to come. Second, it is widely accepted that not only books teach us our surroundings, but also our understanding. It is said that if books make us knowledgeable about life, experience makes us to become mature in the way we deal with every social predicament. In reality, wisdom assists to train ourselves as a more flexible person while books sometimes confuse us, giving us a negative perspective in real life. Take an example into consideration, instead of reading books, it is highly suggested that we should start to do volunteer work in local centres to know more about how the work means in life when we realise that we should pay more attention and give sympathy to the needy in society. On the other hand, it cannot be denied that books still contribute to the essential gaining among people throughout the years. But obviously we are in desperate need to be flexible in the way of gaining knowlegde as is clarified. In summary, I totally agree with the statement that not all vital understandings contains in books, but through any means of life such as family members and practical experience.
There is no denying that
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books
are the primary source of human knowledge from the prehistory to modern society in the present-day world. By contrast, it
generally
seems to me that not all understandings are well achieved from
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books
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but
from other means of
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life
. The main objective in this essay is to have an obvious discussion about my perspectives on the issue mentioned.

To
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begin
with, what
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people
know when entering
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life
is gained
initially
from their
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family
. Almost every
newly
-born babies have a golden opportunity to receive special care from their
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family
members, not least their parents. In a certain period of time, the
first
independent steps,
first
spoken words of these babies will result from their
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family
nurture.
What is more
, there is no wonder that
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family
also
performs an indispensable role in the child development in teaching them the requisite knowledge about their surroundings such as
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colour
identification, numbers, and the most essential is that they are
meticulously
taught to become a well-behaved child towards the society in the
next
years to
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come
.

Second, it is
widely
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accepted
that not
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only
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books
teach us our surroundings,
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but
also
our understanding. It
is said
that if
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books
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make
us knowledgeable about
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life
, experience
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makes
us to become mature in the way we deal with every social predicament. In reality, wisdom assists to train ourselves as a more flexible person while
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books
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sometimes
confuse us, giving us a
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negative
perspective in real
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life
. Take an example into consideration,
instead
of reading
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books
, it is
highly
suggested that we should
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start
to do volunteer work in local
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centres
to know more about how the work means in
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life
when we
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realise
that we should pay more attention and give sympathy to the needy in society.

On the other hand
, it cannot
be denied
that
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books
still
contribute to the essential gaining among
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people
throughout the years.
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But
obviously
we are in desperate need to be flexible in the way of gaining
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knowlegde
as
is clarified
.

In summary, I
totally
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agree
with the statement that not all vital understandings contains in
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books
,
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but
through any means of
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life
such as
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family
members and practical experience.
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IELTS essay The most important knowledge does not come from books.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
365 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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