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The most important knowledge does not come from books.

The most important knowledge does not come from books. 21J6
Books have played a big part in the development of the world, it helps to improve education and provide us with reliable knowleadge. Although, there is an opinion that books doesn't consist of the most important of knowleadge. I totally agree with this statement. Books brought use a lot of useful information, experience which was left behind by those who went first and make a great foundation for stating. Despite all the assistant it brings, it still lack in some area, information which books bring only assist us in some occasion, others still need us to experience it ourselves. If we want to continue developing, we need to be creative and have an open mind. Many books talk about the author own opinions or facts, it can lead to many of us beliving in the author point of view. If we want to grow and discover new elements, we need to find our own point of view. Another factor which books can't cover is the experience that life brings, books cover many knowleadge but some can't be written down or has the same effect on a person. To be sucessful, people needs to find their most improntant knowleadge, their own point of view and how they are unique from the others books can cover many area but it can't cover you. To sum it up, books give us a great foundation to start on but it can't give us experience, some can be written down and some can't. To be successful, we need to find what make us apart from other people, what no books have.
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first
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area, information which
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of us
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give us a great foundation to
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,
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IELTS essay The most important knowledge does not come from books.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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