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THE MOST IMPORTANT CONSIDERATION WHEN CHOOSING ANY CAREER OR JOB IS HAVING A HIGH INCOME.

THE MOST IMPORTANT CONSIDERATION WHEN CHOOSING ANY CAREER OR JOB IS HAVING A HIGH INCOME. K0rpM
In my personal opinion, having a job which I enjoy the best totally out-weights a job that is only able to fulfill my monetary demands and financial expectations. People spend a great deal of their life being occupied by their careers. The average daily hours that an individual may spend working is approximately eight. However, most of the people have more extended work hours. Considering such long time at work, it seems reasonable to try making fun out of your job; otherwise it will be a real pain in the ass.
In my personal opinion, having a job which I enjoy the best
totally
out-weights a job
that is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
able to fulfill my monetary demands and financial expectations.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
spend a great deal of their life
being occupied
by their careers. The average daily hours that an individual may spend working is approximately eight.
However
, most of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
have more extended work hours. Considering such long time at work, it seems reasonable to try making fun out of your job;
otherwise
it will be a real pain in the ass.

IELTS essay THE MOST IMPORTANT CONSIDERATION WHEN CHOOSING ANY CAREER OR JOB IS HAVING A HIGH INCOME.

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2 paragraphs
91 words
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