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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People often argue that having high income jobs is better, in my opinion I feel that satisfaction is better than high income salary. I disagree with having high income. Firstly, having job satisfaction is more important than high salary because people who often earn high income tend to have more stress and less time to be free but people who are satisfied with their jobs tend to be less stressed and not having to worry too much. For instance, a guy who works in arts and designing is often more happy and less stressed and that gives him a freedom of imagination. In other words, he tends to be less stressed and worried but more creative and satisfied.

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