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The Most Important Aspect of a Job Is the Money a Person Earns

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Many people share the belief that the most important aspect of a job is the money they earn. If we don't have the money, we can't afford anything, as a result. But I certainly disagree with the statement that money is the most important aspect of a job. Due to the fact that the happiness and job satisfaction is very essential, but also experience is the most considered thing today. In conclusion, good salary and job satisfaction are one of the most important criteria for any person, but often the two are not available together on the job. But we should focus on the work environment. And feeling safe at work is an important aspect of a job.

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