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The most exciting experiment

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It was during a summer vacation about 2 years ago, and I decided to go back to my hometown to enjoy the vacation. Every day there is fun and exciting. But those are nothing compared to being able to paddle out to the lake by yourself (in fact, with an adult nearby). It was a rather large lake and the water there was crystal clear. I almost missed this memory because I had never sailed before. But my cousins pulled me onto the boat. So our boat journey began and I found myself far from the lake shore. What was interesting was that I could actually see schools of fish swimming around us through the crystal clear waters of the lake! For a second, I forgot my fear. It was really great. I can never forget that moment.

It was during a summer vacation about 2 years ago, and I decided to go back to my hometown to enjoy the vacation. Every day there is fun and exciting. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 those are nothing compared to being able to paddle out to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpoolpondbasinlagoonreservoir
lake
 by yourself (in fact, with an adult nearby). It was a rather
 large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpoolpondbasinlagoonreservoir
lake
 and the water there was crystal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
. I almost missed this memory This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I had never sailed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 my cousins ​​pulled me onto the boat. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 our boat journey began and I found myself far from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpoolpondbasinlagoonreservoir
lake
 shore. What was interesting was that I could actually This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 schools of fish swimming around us through the crystal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 waters of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpoolpondbasinlagoonreservoir
lake
! For a second, I forgot my fear. It was really
 great. I can never forget that moment. 