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The Millennium Bridge in London

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The Millennium Bridge in London, also known as the Wobbly Bridge. The Millennium Bridge opened on 10 June 2000 as London’s first new Thames crossing in more than 100 years. Connecting the City near St. Paul's Cathedral with the South Bank near Tate Modern. The Millennium Bridge began its’ life in 1996 as the winning design of a competition held by the Southwark Council and the Royal Institute of British Architects. What gave the bridge its better-known moniker is the fact that the bridge turned out to be structurally unsound, and so wobbly that pedestrians were literally falling over as they tried to cross it! But today the bridge is more famously through Harry Potter and Half-Blood Prince.
The Millennium
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in London,
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. The Millennium
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opened on 10 June 2000 as London’s
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new Thames crossing in more than 100 years. Connecting the City near St. Paul's Cathedral with the South Bank near Tate Modern. The Millennium
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began
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its better-known moniker is the fact that the
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turned out to be
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wobbly that pedestrians were
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IELTS essay The Millennium Bridge in London

Essay
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3 paragraphs
118 words
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