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Nowadays, it is influenced by some countries by globalization.

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Nowadays, it is influenced by some countries by globalization. Some people say this is a natural process, but others say it is a threat to cultural identity. I will talk about my thoughts and opinions on this. I think it is natural that some countries are influenced and affected by other countries. On the other hand, there are people who think they are violated by cultural identity. This is because there are cases where they say that they have achieved cultural achievements in other countries by using them in other countries. For example, it is argued that kimchi, korea’s unique food, is made in china. Or Japan claims Dokdo to their own land, as if was the island in South Korea. Moreover, on the positive side, we are used to the word globalization. In others words, Jeonse will share and grow together. For example sharing medical technology with the world and extends the lifespan of people around the word. Or share good songs around the world and grow the global music industry. In conclusion, we share with each other globalization and improve global value. My opinions is a natural process of growing the world together.
Nowadays, it
is influenced
by
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some
countries by globalization.

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Some
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people
say this is a natural process,
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but
others say it is a threat to cultural identity.

I will talk about my thoughts and opinions on this.

I
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think
it is natural that
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some
countries
are influenced
and
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affected
by
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other
countries.

On the
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other
hand, there are
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people
who
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think
they
are violated
by cultural identity.

This is
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because
there are cases where they say that they have achieved cultural achievements in
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other
countries by using them in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
countries.

For example
, it
is argued
that kimchi,
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korea
’s unique food,
is made
in
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china
.

Or Japan claims
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Dokdo
to their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
land, as if was the island in South Korea.

Moreover
, on the
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positive
side, we are
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used
to the word globalization.

In others words,
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Jeonse
will share and grow together.

For example
sharing medical technology with the world and extends the lifespan of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
around the word.

Or share
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
songs around the world and grow the global music industry.

In conclusion
, we share with each
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other
globalization and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
global value.

My opinions
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is
a natural process of growing the world together.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, it is influenced by some countries by globalization.

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195 words
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