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the migration of people to cities is one of the biggest problems facing the world's cities today. what are the main causes ? what measures should be adopted by urban authorities to tackle this situation ?

the migration of people to cities is one of the biggest problems facing the world's cities today. what are the main causes? what measures should be adopted by urban authorities to tackle this situation? 8G52l
The movement of people to cities is something which is often discussed in today’s world. It is believed that one of the biggest problems the urban authorities need to face today is the shift of people to urban areas. This essay will analyse several factors, and provide possible measures for this problem. There are number of reasons leading to the immigration of citizens to urban areas. Firstly, the standard of living is higher thanks to the availability of advanced services. People in cities have better jobs with higher salaries, better health care, and entertainment. Secondly, the children can broaden their horizons is because of better education. All the gift schools and big universities are located in urban areas. Parents always want their children to have the best education. From my point of view, a number of following solutions could be adopted to tackle the problem. I think the most obvious solution is to move big universities, hospitals, and factories to rural or mountainous areas. For example, a rehabilitation hospital could be built in a mountainous area, where has fresh air. Or the government might build branches of gift schools and big universities in the countryside. By doing this, people in the countryside could have better jobs, better healthcare and children have better education. A further step is to provide and establish more amenities and entertainment in rural and remote areas. Rural authorities should build more parks, cinemas or even bars. Consequently, citizens will have more things to do for entertainment. This problem could be caused by the standard of living being higher and better education in urban areas which could be solved by relocating big universities, hospitals, and factories to the rural or mountainous areas and providing more amenities and entertainment centers in rural and remote areas.
The movement of
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people
to cities is something which is
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today
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that one of the biggest problems the
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urban
authorities need to face
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today
is the shift of
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to
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urban
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. This essay will
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analyse
several factors, and provide possible measures for this problem.

There are number of reasons leading to the immigration of citizens to
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urban
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areas
.
Firstly
, the standard of living is higher thanks to the availability of advanced services.
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People
in cities have
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better
jobs with higher salaries,
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better
health care, and entertainment.
Secondly
, the children can broaden their horizons is
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because
of
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better
education. All the gift schools and
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big
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universities
are located
in
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urban
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areas
. Parents always want their children to have the best education.

From my point of view, a number of following solutions could
be adopted
to tackle the problem. I
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think
the most obvious solution is to
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move
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big
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universities
, hospitals, and factories to
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rural
or mountainous
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areas
.
For example
, a rehabilitation hospital could
be built
in a mountainous
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area
, where has fresh air. Or the
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government
might build branches of gift schools and
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big
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universities
in the countryside. By doing this,
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people
in the countryside could have
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better
jobs,
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better
healthcare and children have
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better
education. A
further
step is to provide and establish more amenities and entertainment in
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rural
and remote
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areas
.
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Rural
authorities should build more parks, cinemas or even bars.
Consequently
, citizens will have more things to do for entertainment.

This problem could
be caused
by the standard of living being higher and
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better
education in
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urban
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areas
which could
be solved
by relocating
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big
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universities
, hospitals, and factories to the
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rural
or mountainous
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areas
and providing more amenities and entertainment centers in
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rural
and remote
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areas
.
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IELTS essay the migration of people to cities is one of the biggest problems facing the world's cities today. what are the main causes? what measures should be adopted by urban authorities to tackle this situation?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
6.0
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