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The Met Gala event in New York city

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Today, I'm going to talk about the Met gala. The Met Gala is a very special event that happens in New York city where most of the A list celebrities are invited. It is in the metropolitan museum and the best part is when all the celebrities walk the carpet. Normally it is the first monday of may but since covid they changed they had to rearrange it. This year some people were not happy about the decision of the guest that attended. I think that most of the people that were invited deserved to be there, also there were one or two people in my perspective that shouldn't have been invited because the Met gala is one of the most exclusive events. Just for some tiktokers that have barely made it in the industrie. Although most of the celebrities looked stunning, I love judging each look as if I was one of them. To conclude, I love this time of year and look forward to the years to come.
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very
special
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event
that happens in
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New York city
where most of the A list celebrities
are invited
. It is in the metropolitan museum and the best part is when all the celebrities walk the carpet.
Normally
it is the
first
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monday
of may
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since
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covid
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changed
they had to rearrange it. This year
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some
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people
were not happy about the decision of the guest that attended. I
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think
that most of the
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people
that
were invited
deserved to be there,
also
there were one or two
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people
in my perspective that shouldn't have
been invited
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because
the Met gala is one of the most exclusive
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events
.
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Just
for
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some
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tiktokers
that have
barely
made it in the
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industrie
. Although most of the celebrities looked stunning, I
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love
judging each look as if I was one of them.
To conclude
, I
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love
this time of year and look forward to the years to
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come
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IELTS essay The Met Gala event in New York city

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
170 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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