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The mass media includeing television, radio and newspapers have great inewant ahephi people idey. To what essatan do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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IELTS essay The mass media includeing television, radio and newspapers have great inewant ahephi people idey. To what essatan

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
132 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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