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some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives. others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both vies and give your own opinion

some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives. others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both vies and give your own opinion Wadk
life is enjoyable at any age of life as it is just a number. Many individuals have different views on it though some favor teenage is the most cheerful time in life whereas others believe despite being responsible adulthood accompany ecstatic phase of life. I support adult life is the happiest phase of anyone's life. this essay will consider both views as progress further. considering teenage as an enjoyable part of life in various manners. During school time there is a lot of things which are to be learnt and learning with friends make it more interesting. youngsters have no worries about money as they are being supported by their parents. In addition to this, there are not any family responsibilities on the because of these reasons young people enjoy a lot. For instance, children from this age group have only to concentrate on study and their school activities during which they got full support from their guardians and teachers & they just make demands and these all get full filled by their elders. looking to the next stage of life which is full of responsibilities but the wise stage in everyone's life. On reaching this phase of life majority of people become financially independent which makes them wiser than the previous stage of life. No doubts, it comes with huge responsibilities still one can earn plenty of money and patience so that everything would be easily managed. Till this age, one has got plenty of experience and lessons by which real happiness with family and friends could be easily gained. For example, this age gives a lot to anyone like getting a reputed job with a handsome salary or getting married and having a family, these all are the real happiness that one can think of in life. To conclude, it has been discussed in the above discussion although teenage is not accompanied by responsibilities, real happiness can only be earned in the later stage of life.
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individuals have
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favor teenage is the most cheerful time in
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whereas others believe despite being responsible adulthood accompany ecstatic phase of
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. I support adult
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is the happiest phase of anyone's
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.
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this
essay will consider both views as progress
further
.
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considering
teenage as an enjoyable part of
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life
in various manners. During school time there is
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a lot of
things which are to be
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learnt
and learning with friends
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make
it more interesting.
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youngsters
 have no worries about money as they are
being supported
by their parents.
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 to this, there are not any family
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responsibilities
on the
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 of these reasons young
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people
enjoy a lot.
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group have
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only
to concentrate on study and their school activities during which they
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got
full support from their guardians and teachers & they
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make
demands and these all
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get
full filled by their elders.
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looking
to the
next
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which is full of
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the wise
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stage
in everyone's
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. On reaching this phase of
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majority of
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people
become
financially
independent which
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makes
them wiser than the previous
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. No doubts, it
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comes
with huge
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still
one can earn
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plenty
of money and patience
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so
that everything would be
easily
managed. Till this
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age
, one has
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got
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plenty
of experience and lessons by which real happiness with family and friends could be
easily
gained.
For example
, this
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age
gives a lot to anyone like getting a reputed job with a handsome salary or getting married and having a family, these all are the real happiness that one can
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think
of in
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life
.
To conclude
, it has
been discussed
in the above discussion although teenage is not accompanied by
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responsibilities
, real happiness can
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only
be earned
in the later
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stage
of
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life
.
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IELTS essay some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives. others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both vies and give your own opinion

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