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Every several year a language die

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There are several languages that faded annually because of the death of their users. The languages’ disappearance has led to a controversial matter: whether it is beneficial to have fewer languages globally or not. This essay will give the reason why I disagree with the statement above. The reduction of languages around the world will indeed create certain benefits. Firstly, the fewer languages that exist, the less problem we will have in communication. This will help speed up the progress of globalization, people will be having a more thorough understanding of each other. This could lead to a variety of economical benefits for many nations. For example, the relationship between nations will be increased, which will bring more potential investment from developed countries to the less developed ones. Although the vanish of languages seems to be completely advantageous, this could result in the fading of several countries, followed by all their customs and culture. Uncle Ho, the great president of Vietnam once said: “As long as a nation hold fast to their language, it is like holding the key to freedom”. There are certainly no nations that want to lose their mother tongue because it is simply equal to the complete disappearance of that nations. The world is surely a diverse place because of each nation’s customs and features, and I want this planet to remain its’ diversity. In conclusion, even though the decrease of languages in the world will certainly bring a number of advantages, I would say that keeping the diversity in languages is more important to many nations.
There are several
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languages
that faded
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because
of the death of their users. The
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languages’
disappearance has led to a controversial matter: whether it is beneficial to have fewer
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languages
globally or not. This essay will give the reason why I disagree with the statement above.

The reduction of
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languages
around the world will
indeed
create certain benefits.
Firstly
, the fewer
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languages
that exist, the less problem we will have in communication. This will
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help
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speed up
the progress of globalization,
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people
will be having a more thorough understanding of each other. This could lead to a variety of
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economical
benefits for
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many
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nations
.
For example
, the relationship between
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will
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, which will bring more potential investment from
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developed countries
to the less developed ones.

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the vanish
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seems to be completely advantageous, this could result in the fading of several countries, followed by all their customs and culture. Uncle Ho, the great president of Vietnam once said: “As long as a
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nation
hold
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fast
to their
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language
, it is like holding the key to freedom”. There are
certainly
no
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nations
that want to lose their mother tongue
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because
it is
simply
equal to the complete disappearance of that
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nations
. The world is
surely
a diverse place
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because
of each
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nation’s
customs and features, and I want this planet to remain its’ diversity.

In conclusion
,
even though
the decrease of
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languages
in the world will
certainly
bring a number of advantages, I would say that keeping the diversity in
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languages
is more
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important
to
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IELTS essay Every several year a language die

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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