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The man expresses his opinions about the university’s plan. State his opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion. TPO5 v.1

The man expresses his opinions about the university’s plan. State his opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion. TPO5 v. 1
Human interferences in nature have been recognized as a detrimental effect on the environment. Although, some people believe that these actions will destroy the earth planet, the majority of them are assured of the positive variation in order to preserve the plant and animal species. In my opinion, it will be possible that if people comply with corrective acts, they will pay off a good result in towards. It is an undeniable truth that the deforestation has been caused irreversible damage to the ecosystem. It is the permanent removal of trees for agricultural or grazing and constructions and manufacturing. Also، the effect of erosion is mainly causing environment worse, such as ground erosion, which includes the washing away of land during monsoon season. Heavy raining leached of minerals by the large amounts of water. Due to the lack of vegetation and trees reduce the amount of nutrients stored in the clay. Therefore, these areas have a negative impact on the ecosystem that will not be compensated. On the other hand, in most parts of the world due to raise public awareness, there have been new development that enforces reforestation. As well as, new laws and regulations approved especially in Asia, which new trees have been planted and old ones are not allowed to be cut down. Provided that it continues, there might be a chance to stop logging and reverse the whole process completely. For instance, Haiti is one of the developing countries that depends on agriculture sector and its nature, have been deteriorated by extreme dust erosion and desertification. So to stop these processes, they start to educate local residents and farmers to revamp the environment by reforestation project. All in all, the plant and animal species which already lost are not recoverable in certain cases. However, with proper activities and training people about the importance of natural wealth, we can save nature and human-beings.
Human interferences in nature have
been recognized
as a detrimental effect on the environment. Although,
some
people
believe that these actions will
destroy
the earth planet, the majority of them
are assured
of the
positive
variation in order to preserve the plant and animal species. In my opinion, it will be possible that if
people
comply with corrective acts, they will pay off a
good
result in towards.

It is an undeniable truth that the deforestation has
been caused
irreversible damage to the ecosystem. It is the permanent removal of trees for agricultural or grazing and constructions and manufacturing.
Also،
the effect of erosion is
mainly
causing environment worse, such as ground erosion, which includes the washing away of land during monsoon season. Heavy raining leached of minerals by the large amounts of water. Due to the lack of vegetation and trees
reduce
the amount of nutrients stored in the clay.
Therefore
, these areas have a
negative
impact on the ecosystem that will not
be compensated
.

On the other hand
, in most parts of the world due to raise public awareness, there have been new development that enforces reforestation.
As well
as, new laws and regulations approved
especially
in Asia, which new trees have
been planted
and
old
ones are not
allowed
to be
cut
down. Provided that it continues, there might be a chance to
stop
logging and reverse the whole process completely.
For instance
, Haiti is one of the
developing countries
that depends on agriculture sector and its nature, have
been deteriorated
by extreme dust erosion and desertification.
So
to
stop
these processes, they
start
to educate local residents and farmers to revamp the environment by reforestation project.

All in all, the plant and animal species which already lost are not recoverable in certain cases.
However
, with proper activities and training
people
about the importance of natural wealth, we can save nature and human-beings.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The man expresses his opinions about the university’s plan. State his opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion. TPO5 v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
316 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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