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the main problems are both environmental and financial. The possible solutions

the main problems are both environmental and financial. The possible solutions Xyg5A
It is inevitable that modern households will produce some waste, but the increasing volumes of refuse over recent years present a challenge for us all. There seem to be two main problems stemming from this situation, and also two steps we could take to address it fully. Possible the major problem is the huge question of how to collect, process and dispose of this material. Household waste comprises elements ranging from foodstuffs to metal, paper and plastics, and local authorities sometimes struggle to handle such a diverse mix of material. The historical solution has been incineration or landfill, but the problems of pollution and long-term ground contamination which arise have led to widespread efforts to recycle at least some of the waste. This leads us to the second concern, which is the high cost of disposing of refuse in an ecologically sound manner. We would all wish as much as possible of our rubbish to be recycled (for example by paper pulping or reusing plastics) but the expense involved must be met by higher taxes and charges for households. Regarding possible solutions, probably the most immediate short-term solution would be to divert far more government funds into waste processing and recycling facilities at a local level. This would reduce the environmental impact of the waste by reducing pollution, and also lower our demand for raw materials, as more recycled products would consequently be produced. A further, longer-term solution might be to raise the level of public understanding for the need to consume less material in households, especially in terms of packaging and wasted food. A campaign of education along these lines would gradually lessen the volume of waste, especially if reinforced by incentives for consuming less and penalties for excessive waste, as we see being trialled in the UK at present. Overall, the main problems are both environmental and financial. The possible solutions involve more immediate investment in facilities, and also encouraging long-term changes in household behaviour.
It is inevitable that modern households will produce
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some
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waste
,
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but
the increasing volumes

of refuse over recent years present a challenge for us all. There seem to be two main problems

stemming from this situation, and
also
two steps we could take to address it
fully
.

Possible the major problem is the huge question of how to collect, process and dispose of this

material. Household
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waste
comprises elements ranging from foodstuffs to metal, paper and plastics,

and local authorities
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sometimes
struggle to handle such a diverse mix of material. The historical

solution has been incineration or landfill,
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but
the problems of pollution and long-term ground contamination which arise have led to widespread efforts to recycle at least
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some of the
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waste
. This

leads us to the second concern, which is the high cost of disposing of refuse in an
ecologically
sound

manner. We would all wish as much as possible of our rubbish to
be recycled
(
for example
by paper

pulping or reusing plastics)
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but
the expense involved
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must
be met
by higher taxes and charges for

households.

Regarding possible solutions,
probably
the most immediate short-term solution would be to

divert far more
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government
funds into
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waste
processing and recycling facilities at a local level. This

would
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reduce
the environmental impact of the
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waste
by reducing pollution, and
also
lower our

demand for raw materials, as more recycled products would
consequently
be produced
. A
further
,

longer-term solution might be to raise the level of public understanding for the need to consume less

material in households,
especially
in terms of packaging and wasted food. A campaign of education

along these lines would
gradually
lessen the volume of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
,
especially
if reinforced by incentives

for consuming less and penalties for excessive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
, as we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
being
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trialled
in the UK at present.

Overall
, the main problems are both environmental and financial. The possible solutions

involve more immediate investment in facilities, and
also
encouraging long-term
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changes
in

household
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behaviour
.
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IELTS essay the main problems are both environmental and financial. The possible solutions

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