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the luckiest day in my life

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Our lives depend on knowledge and skills. But there will be times when luck will change everything. For instance in the Champions League, Young boys defeated Manchester United, who was quite strong and powerful, by luckiest. So I want to tell you about the luckiest day in my life. It happened on August 3, 2017. On this day I decided to pass the exam to Specialized Boarding School №1 which was the most well-known school in Fergana (the people who lived there called this school - Fizmat). But I had a problem - I didn’t prepare for the exam, because my parents told me about the exam approximately 3 or 4 days before. At the time, we didn’t know how big a role Fizmat would play in my future. On exam day I was so excited and as soon as the exam began I glanced at all my questions. I thought, “Questions are so difficult and I don’t know the main part of questions”. But I believed that my parents’ blessing would bring me good luck. So, I began to solve questions which were I could answer. When I had only 10 minutes, I ticked “D”(My name begins this letter) to all questions, except I had solved. On a resultant day, it turned out I entered school. I was so happy and I didn’t forget August 3, 2017, which was the luckiest day in my life. Fizmat helped me to improve my skills, to improve my worldview. While I was studying at Fizmat, I had a lot of success. I must tell you that if I hadn’t studied at Fizmat, I wouldn’t be studying at President school now.
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there will be times when luck will
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So
I want to
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you about the luckiest day in my life. It happened on August 3, 2017.

On this day I decided to pass the exam to Specialized Boarding
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School
№1 which was the most well-known
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school
in
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Fergana
(the
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people
who
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lived
there called this
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school
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Fizmat
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I had a problem
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I didn’t prepare for the exam,
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my parents
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me about the exam approximately 3 or 4 days
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. At the time, we didn’t know how
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a role
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Fizmat
would play in my future. On exam day I was
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excited and as
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as the exam began I glanced at all my
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. I
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,
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difficult and I don’t know the main part of
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But
I believed that my parents’ blessing would bring me
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good
luck.
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, I began to solve
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which were I could answer. When I had
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10 minutes, I ticked “D”(My name
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, except I had solved. On a resultant day, it turned out I entered
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school
. I was
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happy and I didn’t forget August 3, 2017, which was the luckiest day in my life.
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Fizmat
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helped
me to
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improve
my
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skills
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improve
my worldview. While I was studying at
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Fizmat
, I had
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a lot of
success. I
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you that if I hadn’t studied at
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, I wouldn’t be studying at President
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IELTS essay the luckiest day in my life

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
278 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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