Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The lockdown, one of the social isolation restrictions, has been observed to prevent the COVID-19 pandemic, and showed that the spread of the virus can be significantly reduced by this preventive restriction. Do you agree or disagree?

The lockdown, one of the social isolation restrictions, has been observed to prevent the COVID-19 pandemic, and showed that the spread of the virus can be significantly reduced by this preventive restriction. brwBQ
After the Global proliferation of COVID-19, many nations have put down the restriction of lockdown to control its further spread. However, as COVID-19 is a communicable disease, I agree with the statement that lockdown has an immense impact on controlling this from further spread. In this essay, I will share my views on it. In recent years, due to the deadly communicable disease COVID-19, humanity has suffered a lot. Many lives have gone, and the lockdown was imposed worldwide as there was no cure for this. This has helped many nations for its further spread. However, in some countries like Australia, Singapore, etc. , disease impact has hardly been noticed due to international movement cut-off. Furthermore, even developed countries like America which hardly cared about it and had imposed no lockdown at a very early stage, have suffered many consequences. As a result, the death rate increased enormously, and the lockdown was finally imposed to control it. Consequently, until remedies are not available in the market, lockdown turns out to be the best solution to control it. In summary, despite lockdown, it is not possible to defeat deadly diseases like COVID-19, but until actual medicines are not available, this can be used as the best cure.
After the Global proliferation of COVID-19,
many
nations have put down the restriction of lockdown to control its
further
spread.
However
, as COVID-19 is a communicable
disease
, I
agree
with the statement that lockdown has an immense impact on controlling this from
further
spread. In this essay, I will share my views on it.

In recent years, due to the deadly communicable
disease
COVID-19, humanity has suffered a lot.
Many
lives
have gone, and the lockdown
was imposed
worldwide as there was no cure for this. This has
helped
many
nations for its
further
spread.
However
, in
some
countries like Australia, Singapore, etc.
,
disease
impact has hardly
been noticed
due to international movement
cut
-off.

Furthermore
, even
developed countries
like America which hardly cared about it and had imposed no lockdown at a
very
early stage, have suffered
many
consequences.
As a result
, the death rate increased
enormously
, and the lockdown was
finally
imposed to control it.
Consequently
, until remedies are not available in the market, lockdown turns out to be the best solution to control it.

In summary, despite lockdown, it is not possible to defeat deadly
diseases
like COVID-19,
but
until actual medicines are not available, this can be
used
as the best cure.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay The lockdown, one of the social isolation restrictions, has been observed to prevent the COVID-19 pandemic, and showed that the spread of the virus can be significantly reduced by this preventive restriction.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
206 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts