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You have been on a work training course. Your manager wants to know about it. Write to him.

You have been on a work training course. Your manager wants to know about it. Write to him. BgbVd
It has been 3 months since I sent you a letter regarding my interest to pursue additional training to support my current position in this institution. And because of your unending help and goodness of your heart, you never denied such. I am glad to inform you that I successfully taken the English course I requested. As an English professor, I do believe that learning is a continuous process. This course provided new techniques and ideas I can apply to my daily teachings. On its first week, all participants had intensive lectures covering all 4 modules they have provided. I can't imagine we tackled the important parts in short amount of time. In its second week, the center showed us several approach on how to make lesson plans depending on the size and age of the group we are teaching. I was amazed on how updated and easy these methods are. Props, lecture guides, videos and website links were provided and sent to all the attendees through email, which I think is truly convient. The most exciting week for me was the third and last week, each of us (trainees) were given topics we need to teach to a small group of college students. Aside from few handwritten exams from the last 2 weeks, this trial lesson will determine whether we pass the training or not. Gladly, I passed with flying colors and received "A" equivalent to 95 to 90%. If I were to do it again I would love to have more trial lessons were in I could apply the things I've learned. Exactly what we've done the last week. I believe hands on training would benefit us more since we are all in the teaching field already. To sum it all up, Its a great experience and I can't thank you enough for giving me this opportunity. I truly appreciate it. I can assure you that this course will not only benefit me but more on to our students. The techniques I learned will not only make them focus and enthusiastic in class but will eventually make them love the English language as well. May this letter finds you well, hope to hear from you soon.
It has been 3 months since I
sent
you a letter regarding my interest to pursue additional training to support my
current
position in this institution. And
because
of your unending
help
and goodness of your heart, you never denied such. I am glad to inform you that I
successfully
taken the English course I requested.

As an English professor, I do believe that learning is a continuous process. This course provided new techniques and
ideas
I can apply to my daily teachings. On its
first
week
, all participants had intensive lectures covering all 4 modules they have provided. I can't imagine we tackled the
important
parts in short amount of time.

In its second
week
, the center
showed
us several approach on how to
make
lesson plans depending on the size and age of the group we are teaching. I
was amazed
on how updated and easy these methods are. Props, lecture guides, videos and website links
were provided
and
sent
to all the attendees through email, which I
think
is
truly
convient
.

The most exciting
week
for me was the third and last
week
, each of us (trainees) were
given
topics we need to teach to a
small
group of college students. Aside from few handwritten exams from the last 2
weeks
, this trial lesson will determine whether we pass the training or not.
Gladly
, I passed with flying colors and received
"
A
"
equivalent to 95 to 90%.

If
I were to do it again I would
love
to have more trial lessons were in I could apply the things I've learned. Exactly what we've done the last
week
. I believe hands on training would benefit us more since we are all in the teaching field already.

To sum it all up,
Its
a great experience and I can't thank you
enough
for giving me this opportunity. I
truly
appreciate it. I can assure you that this course will not
only
benefit me
but
more on to our students. The techniques I learned will not
only
make
them focus and enthusiastic in
class
but
will
eventually
make
them
love
the English language
as well
.

May this letter finds you well, hope to hear from you
soon
.
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IELTS essay You have been on a work training course. Your manager wants to know about it. Write to him.

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
368 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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