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The Little Ice Age

The Little Ice Age PVXo2
In the passage, the author mentions three reasons provided by scientists of causing the Little Ice Age. However, the lecturer conversely thinks that none of these reasons could bring about the Little Ice Age. To substantiate his stance, there are three contentions opposing these three mentioned reasons in the following. First, according to the disruption of the ocean currents, the lecturer disputes that even though the currents indeed influence the Earth's climate, the affected area was only in North America. But the influenced areas by the Little Ice Age include Australia and so on. Therefore, the first reason was not rather convincing. Second, based on the volcanic eruption, the lecturer positively indicates that the temperature would decrease due to the volcanic eruption. Nevertheless, such eruptions should be visualized by people. There was no any record about the colossal eruptions which were enough to create the Little Ice Age. Thus, the second reason was not persuasive. Third, concerning the populations of human being, the lecturer adversely asserts that the forests did not have enough to decrease the temperature. Because of the relatively short span of time, the trees could not diminish the greenhouse effect. Hence, the third reason was not trustworthy as well.
In the passage, the author mentions three
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reasons
provided by scientists of causing the
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Little
Ice
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Age
.
However
, the
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lecturer
conversely
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thinks
that none of these
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reasons
could bring about the
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Little
Ice
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Age
. To substantiate his stance, there are three contentions opposing these three mentioned
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reasons
in the following.

First
, according to the disruption of the ocean currents, the
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lecturer
disputes that
even though
the currents
indeed
influence the Earth's climate, the
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affected
area was
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only
in North America.
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But
the influenced areas by the
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Little
Ice
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Age
include Australia and
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so
on.
Therefore
, the
first
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reason
was not
rather
convincing.

Second, based on the volcanic
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eruption
, the
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lecturer
positively
indicates that the temperature would decrease due to the volcanic
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eruption
.
Nevertheless
, such
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eruptions
should
be visualized
by
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people
. There was
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no
any record about the colossal
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eruptions
which were
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enough
to create the
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Little
Ice
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Age
.
Thus
, the second
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reason
was not persuasive.

Third, concerning the populations of human being, the
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lecturer
adversely
asserts that the forests did not have
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enough
to decrease the temperature.
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Because
of the
relatively
short span of time, the trees could not diminish the greenhouse effect.
Hence
, the third
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reason
was not trustworthy
as well
.
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IELTS essay The Little Ice Age

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
202 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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