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The life without the death

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Until recently, the thought that there might ever be a cure for ageing seemed preposterous. Growing older and more decrepit appeared to be an inevitable and necessary part of being human. Over the last decade, however, scientists have begun to see ageing differently. Some now believe that the average life-expectancy may soon be pushed up to 160 years; others think that it may be extended to 200 or 300 years. A handful even wonder whether we might one day live for a millennium or more. Behind this new excitement is the theory that the primary cause of ageing lies in highly reactive molecules called free radicals, left behind by the oxygen we breathe. Free radicals react with the molecules in our bodies, damaging DNA, proteins and other cell tissues, and are known to be implicated in diseases as diverse as cataracts, cancer and Alzheimer's. The body does its best to protect itself against free radicals by producing its own chemicals to prevent ageing, such as vitamins E and C, but it is always fighting a losing battle. A year ago Gordon Lithgow of the University of Manchester discovered a way to help combat free radicals. Using one of these anti-ageing chemicals. he managed to increase the lifespan of one species of earthworm by 50 per cent. Despite cautionary words from the scientists, many welcomed this as the first step towards a drug which would extend life. Research involving the mutation of genes has also thrown up fascinating results: after identifying two of the genes that appear to control how long the earthworm lives, similar genes were found in organisms as various as fruit-flies, mice and human beings. When one considers the vast evolutionary distances that separate these species, it suggests that we may have discovered a key to how ageing is regulated throughout the entire animal kingdom. In June last year a small American company called Eukarion sought permission to carry out the first trials of an anti-ageing drug, SCS, on human beings. Although it will initially be used to treat diseases associated with old age, Eukarion said, that 'if the effect of treating diseases of old age is to extend life, everyone's going to be happy. ' Some scientists, however, are quick to discourage extravagant speculation. 'There is no evidence whatsoever that swallowing any chemical would have an effect on mammals', says Rich Miller of the University of Michigan. 'And those people who claim it might need to go out and do some experimenting'. Some research, moreover, has produced alarming results. As well as controlling ageing, these, genes also partly control the hormones which regulate growth. The upshot of this is that although the lives of mutant mice can be extended by up to 80 per cent, they remain smaller than normal. Quite apart from these sorts of horrors, the ethical implications of extending human lifespan are likely to worry many people. Even if the falling birth-rates reported in the world's developed nations were to be repeated throughout the world, would this be sufficient to compensate for massively extended life-expectancy, and would we be willing to see the demographic balance of our society change out of all recognition? David Gems, the head of the Centre for Research into Ageing at University College, London, is enthusiastic about the opportunities opened up by extended life, but even he observes, 'If people live much longer, the proportion of children would. of course, be very small. It strikes me that it might feel rather claustrophobic: all those middle-aged people and very few children or young people. ' The philosopher John Polkinghorne emphasises that any discussion of the merits of life-extending therapies must take into account the quality of the life that is lived: 'One would not wish to prolong life beyond the point it had ceased to be creative and fulfilling and meaningful, ' he says. 'Presumably, there would have to come a point at which life ceased to be creative and became just repetition. Clearly, there are only so many rounds of golf one would want to play. ' But Polkinghorne, a member of the Human Genetics Commission, also observes that so far our experience of extended life-expectancy has not resulted in world-weariness. Throughout the last century, life-expectancy rose consistently, thanks to improved diet, better hygiene, continuous medical innovation and the provision of free or subsidised healthcare. In 1952 the Queen sent out 225 telegrams to people on their 100th birthday; in 1996 she sent out 5218. 'Consider also, the lives of our Roman and Anglo-Saxon ancestors' he says. By and large, the doubling of human lifespan we have seen since then has not been a bad thing. Life has not become frustrating and boring. For example, we now live to see our children's children, and this is good. '
Until recently, the
thought
that there
might
ever be a cure for
ageing
seemed preposterous. Growing older and more decrepit appeared to be an inevitable and necessary part of being
human
. Over the last decade,
however
, scientists have begun to
see
ageing
differently
.
Some
now
believe that the average
life-expectancy
may
soon
be pushed
up to 160 years; others
think
that it may be
extended
to 200 or 300 years. A handful even wonder whether we
might
one day
live
for a millennium or more.

Behind this new excitement is the theory that the primary cause of
ageing
lies in
highly
reactive molecules called
free
radicals
,
left
behind by the oxygen we breathe.
Free
radicals
react with the molecules in our bodies, damaging DNA, proteins and other cell tissues, and
are known
to
be implicated
in diseases as diverse as cataracts, cancer and Alzheimer's. The body does its best to protect itself against
free
radicals
by producing its
own
chemicals to
prevent
ageing
, such as vitamins E and C,
but
it is always fighting a losing battle.

A
year
ago Gordon Lithgow of the University of Manchester discovered a way to
help
combat
free
radicals
. Using one of these
anti-ageing
chemicals.
he
managed to increase the lifespan of one species of earthworm by 50 per cent. Despite cautionary words from the scientists,
many
welcomed this as the
first
step towards a drug which would extend
life
. Research involving the mutation of genes has
also
thrown up fascinating results: after identifying two of the genes that appear to control how long the earthworm
lives
, similar genes
were found
in organisms as various as fruit-flies, mice and
human
beings. When one considers the vast evolutionary distances that separate these species, it suggests that we may have discovered a key to how
ageing
is regulated
throughout the entire animal kingdom.

In June last
year
a
small
American
company
called
Eukarion
sought permission to carry out the
first
trials of an
anti-ageing
drug, SCS, on
human
beings. Although it will
initially
be
used
to treat diseases associated with
old
age,
Eukarion
said, that 'if the effect of treating diseases of
old
age is to extend
life
, everyone's going to be happy. '

Some
scientists,
however
, are quick to discourage extravagant speculation. 'There is no evidence whatsoever that swallowing any chemical would have an effect on mammals', says Rich Miller of the University of Michigan. 'And those
people
who claim it
might
need to go out and do
some
experimenting'.
Some
research,
moreover
, has produced alarming results.
As well
as controlling
ageing
, these, genes
also
partly control the hormones which regulate growth. The upshot of this is that although the
lives
of mutant mice can be
extended
by up to 80 per cent, they remain smaller than normal.

Quite apart from these sorts of horrors, the ethical implications of extending
human
lifespan are likely to worry
many
people
. Even if the falling birth-rates reported in the world's developed nations were to
be repeated
throughout the world, would this be sufficient to compensate for
massively
extended
life-expectancy
, and would we be willing to
see
the demographic balance of our society
change
out of all recognition? David Gems, the head of the
Centre
for Research into
Ageing
at University College, London, is enthusiastic about the opportunities opened up by
extended
life
,
but
even he observes, 'If
people
live
much longer, the proportion of children would.
of
course, be
very
small
. It strikes me that it
might
feel
rather
claustrophobic: all those middle-aged
people
and
very
few children or young
people
. '

The philosopher John
Polkinghorne
emphasises
that any discussion of the merits of life-extending therapies
must
take into account the quality of the
life
that is
lived
: 'One would not wish to prolong
life
beyond the point it had ceased to be creative and fulfilling and meaningful,
'
he says. 'Presumably, there would
have to
come
a point at which
life
ceased to be creative and became
just
repetition.
Clearly
, there are
only
so
many
rounds of golf one would want to play. '

But
Polkinghorne
, a member of the
Human
Genetics Commission,
also
observes that
so
far our experience of
extended
life-expectancy
has not resulted in world-weariness. Throughout the last century,
life-expectancy
rose
consistently
, thanks to
improved
diet, better hygiene, continuous medical innovation and the provision of
free
or
subsidised
healthcare. In 1952 the Queen
sent
out 225 telegrams to
people
on their 100th birthday; in 1996 she
sent
out 5218. 'Consider
also
, the
lives
of our Roman and Anglo-Saxon ancestors' he says. By and large, the doubling of
human
lifespan we have
seen
since then has not been a
bad
thing.
Life
has not become frustrating and boring.
For example
, we
now
live
to
see
our children's children, and this is
good
. '
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IELTS essay The life without the death

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
797 words
5.5
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