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An American film actor once said, "Tomorrow is important and precious." Some believe that individuals and countries should pay more attention to future than to the past. Give your own experience and examples

An American film actor once said, "Tomorrow is important and precious. " Some believe that individuals and countries should pay more attention to future than to the past. Give your own experience and examples gqaAg
In the contemporary world, it is a requisite for people to make their future bright and secure. A number of folks are supporting the notion that was given by an American film actor. A person should more focus on his or her future than the past. Nowadays, Individuals as well as country! should learn from their past experiences and have to toy that mistakes -would not repeat in future. Moreover, we cannot do anything with the situation which has already happened So it is worthless to waste our time behind that Situation. The future is more precious for every Person whether he is a student, employee, or any kind of worker. As this notion connects with students, If students were not passed out or achieved lower marks in any subject in their education then without losing hopes he has to try to get more marks for the next examination. However, we should not neglect our past as well. Because with the help of past incidents we can learn a lot of things which might save us from the happening Same mistakes in the future. For instance, In 2009, coronavirus was spreading all over the World Although in the early Stage India was safe. Besides this, after knowing the worst condition of Other countries, India had not taken any pre-steps. Therefore, in mid of 2020, Corona cases had begun in India, and a lot of people died. Further, the Same situation is happing now with the omicron virus. However, this time India is ready with all the medical treatment. As a result, India has fewer cases of omicron virus-affected people and this is a great achievement for the Indians. Hence, as an aforementioned example proved that the future is the most important asset. To sum up, tomorrow is important for individuals as well as countries because it is the one major asset which would help them to grow their economy and also reputation.
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people
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make
their
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future
bright and secure. A number of folks are supporting the notion that was
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given
by an American film actor. A person should more focus on
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his or her
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future
than the past.

Nowadays, Individuals
as well
as country!
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should
learn from their
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past experiences
and
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have to
toy that mistakes -would not repeat in
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future
.
Moreover
, we cannot do anything with the situation which has already happened
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So
it is worthless to waste our time behind that Situation. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
is more precious for every Person whether he is a student, employee, or any kind of worker. As this notion connects with students, If students were not passed out or achieved lower marks in any subject in their education then without losing hopes he
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
has to
try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
more marks for the
next
examination.

However
, we should not neglect our past
as well
.
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Because
with the
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help
of past incidents we can learn
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a lot of
things which might save us from the happening Same mistakes in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
.
For instance
, In 2009, coronavirus was spreading all over the World Although in the early Stage India was safe.
Besides
this, after knowing the worst condition of Other countries, India had not taken any
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pre-steps
.
Therefore
, in mid of 2020, Corona cases had begun in India, and
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a lot of
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people
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died
.
Further
, the Same situation is
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happing
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now
with the omicron virus.
However
, this time India is ready with all the medical treatment.
As a result
, India has fewer cases of omicron virus-
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affected
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people
and this is a great achievement for the Indians.
Hence
, as an aforementioned example proved that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
is the most
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important
asset.

To sum up, tomorrow is
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important
for individuals
as well
as countries
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because
it is the one major asset which would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them to grow their economy and
also
reputation.
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IELTS essay An American film actor once said, "Tomorrow is important and precious. " Some believe that individuals and countries should pay more attention to future than to the past. Give your own experience and examples

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