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The key to solving environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient way of life for the sake of future generations. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words.

The key to solving the environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient lifestyle for the sake of future generations. Agree/disagree? v. 1
The availability of natural resources is limited which sooner or later going to exhausted due to over use. Human depends on the environment as it provides food, air and shelter but due to current excessive use of this resources can be a problem for the survival of upcoming generation. This essay will discuss why the present generation need to change their way of living to ensure the continuation of future generation. Major environmental issue which we are facing is, climate change. It is caused because of too much burning of fossil fuel. The use of car, air-conditioned, gas, etc leads to emission of greenhouse gases and all of it is promoting the global warming. To keep this in control we need to cut down the usage of all of these facilities, recent studies show that during the global pandemic when whole world was under lock down there was 30% positive growth in earths climatic condition. If we can plan and keep the usage of no-renewable resources under control we would be able to solve major problems. Apart from usage of fossil fuel we can even try reusing the some of the material. Recycling and making thing eco-friendly will always help in reducing the environmental damage which we cause daily. For e. g. simply using recycle material for building house can help in controlling and limiting the usage of 37% of raw material which we obtain from earth. These kinds of small factors can help in reducing the nature problems and providing the solution to it. In conclusion, with small change in our daily habits and way of living can create a huge impact of solving major environmental challenges in future. It is everyone's responsibility to invest in recycle product and to minimize the usage of petrol, oil and gas so that our children can also have access to it. The availability of natural resources is limited which sooner or later going to exhausted due to over use. Human depends on the environment as it provides food, air and shelter but due to current excessive use of this resources can be a problem for the survival of upcoming generation. This essay will discuss why the present generation need to change their way of living to ensure the continuation of future generation. Major environmental issue which we are facing is, climate change. It is caused because of too much burning of fossil fuel. The use of car, air-conditioned, gas, etc leads to emission of greenhouse gases and all of it is promoting the global warming. To keep this in control we need to cut down the usage of all of these facilities, recent studies show that during the global pandemic when whole world was under lock down there was 30% positive growth in earths climatic condition. If we can plan and keep the usage of no-renewable resources under control we would be able to solve major problems. Apart from usage of fossil fuel we can even try reusing the some of the material. Recycling and making thing eco-friendly will always help in reducing the environmental damage which we cause daily. For e. g. simply using recycle material for building house can help in controlling and limiting the usage of 37% of raw material which we obtain from earth. These kinds of small factors can help in reducing the nature problems and providing the solution to it. In conclusion, with small change in our daily habits and way of living can create a huge impact of solving major environmental challenges in future. It is everyone's responsibility to invest in recycle product and to minimize the usage of petrol, oil and gas so that our children can also have access to it.
The availability of natural resources
is limited
which sooner or later going to
'Going to' requires the base form: "exhaust"
exhausted
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
due
to over
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
. Human depends on the environment as it provides food, air and shelter
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
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due
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
excessive
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use
of
Did you mean "these"?
this
resources can be a
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problem
for the survival of upcoming generation. This essay will discuss why the present generation
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need
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
their way of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
to ensure the continuation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
generation.

Major
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
issue which we are facing is, climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
. It
is caused
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of too much burning of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fossil
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuel
. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of car, air-conditioned,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gas
, etc leads to emission of greenhouse gases and all of it is promoting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
global
warming. To
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
keep
this in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
control
we
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
down
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
usage
of all of these facilities, recent studies
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
that during the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
global
pandemic when whole world was under lock
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
down
there was 30%
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
growth in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earths
climatic condition. If we can plan and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
keep
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
usage
of no-renewable resources under
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
control
we would be able to solve
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
major
problems.

Apart from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
usage
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fossil
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuel
we can even try reusing the
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
some of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
. Recycling and making thing eco-friendly will always
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
in reducing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
damage which we cause
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
daily
. For
There should be no space here: "e.g.".
e. g.
simply
using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
for building
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
in controlling and limiting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
usage
of 37% of raw
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
which we obtain from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earth
. These kinds of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
small
factors can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
in reducing the nature
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
and providing the solution to it.

In conclusion
, with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
in our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
daily
habits and way of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
can create a huge impact of solving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
major
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
challenges in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
. It is everyone's responsibility to invest in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
product and to minimize the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
usage
of petrol, oil and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gas
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that our children can
also
have access to it. The availability of natural resources
is limited
which sooner or later going to
'Going to' requires the base form: "exhaust"
exhausted
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
due
to over
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
. Human depends on the environment as it provides food, air and shelter
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
due
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
excessive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
Did you mean "these"?
this
resources can be a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
for the survival of upcoming generation. This essay will discuss why the present generation
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
their way of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
to ensure the continuation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
generation.

Major
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
issue which we are facing is, climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
. It
is caused
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of too much burning of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fossil
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuel
. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of car, air-conditioned,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gas
, etc leads to emission of greenhouse gases and all of it is promoting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
global
warming. To
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
keep
this in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
control
we
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
down
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
usage
of all of these facilities, recent studies
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
that during the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
global
pandemic when whole world was under lock
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
down
there was 30%
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
growth in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earths
climatic condition. If we can plan and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
keep
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
usage
of no-renewable resources under
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
control
we would be able to solve
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
major
problems.

Apart from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
usage
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fossil
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuel
we can even try reusing the
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
some of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
. Recycling and making thing eco-friendly will always
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
in reducing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
damage which we cause
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
daily
. For
There should be no space here: "e.g.".
e. g.
simply
using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
for building
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
in controlling and limiting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
usage
of 37% of raw
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
which we obtain from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earth
. These kinds of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
small
factors can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
in reducing the nature
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
and providing the solution to it.

In conclusion
, with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
in our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
daily
habits and way of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
living
can create a huge impact of solving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
major
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
challenges in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
. It is everyone's responsibility to invest in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
product and to minimize the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
usage
of petrol, oil and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gas
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that our children can
also
have access to it.
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IELTS essay The key to solving environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient way of life for the sake of future generations.

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
618 words
5.5
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