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The internet will never replace traditional course books in schools. how far do you agree with this prediction? v.6

The internet will never replace traditional course books in schools. how far do you agree with this prediction? v. 6
The effectiveness of internet for the purpose of the study is a widely debatable concept. Many people believe that web based study materials can never outweigh the conventional textbooks in adding value. I completely agree with this opinion and thus this essay will discuss why traditional books are always superior to internet contents for educational purpose. The internet has launched a broad new source of knowledge for the last few decades. With the help of this wonder, anyone can have access to almost every kind of information as they require. Likewise, students too are making use of the world wide web facility to enrich their study materials. This is undeniable today that such freshers' study, practice will be greatly hampered if they suddenly lose connectivity to this technology. To illustrate more, Harvard University published a recent journal stating that 85% of American kids admitted to avail internet service for the sake of their assignments, laboratory research and examination preparation. Despite the essential assistance obtained from using the net to supplement educational knowledge, the idea that internet facility can ever replace traditional course books in schools is completely preposterous. Information received from websites always bears the risk of authenticity and no elaborate insights on findings are available there either. The conventional textbooks are written by profound academicians and researchers of respective nations. Therefore, the pieces of writing they share are invaluable and reliable to use in the study. For example, a research led by Oxford University in 2019 reveals that academic books suggested by schools in the UK are alone sufficient to meet the need of all students. In addition to this, pupils adapt to the extremely useful habit of reading books by following their prescribed materials in schools. In conclusion, the internet has opened up a novel era of sharing unlimited access to a wide variety of information and this theory is absolutely justified. However, students ought to follow advised workbooks in school level education because of their proven genuineness of the information and the intuitions offered by the celebrated scholars.
The effectiveness of internet for the purpose of the
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study
is a
widely
debatable concept.
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Many
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people
believe that web based
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study
materials can never outweigh the conventional textbooks in adding value. I completely
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agree
with this opinion and
thus
this essay will discuss why traditional
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books
are always superior to internet contents for educational purpose.

The internet has launched a broad new source of knowledge for the last few decades. With the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of this wonder, anyone can have access to almost every kind of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
as they require.
Likewise
, students too are making
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of the
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
world wide web
facility to enrich their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
materials. This is undeniable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
that such freshers'
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
, practice will be
greatly
hampered if they
suddenly
lose connectivity to this technology. To illustrate more, Harvard University published a recent journal stating that 85% of American kids admitted to avail internet service for the sake of their assignments, laboratory research and examination preparation.

Despite the essential assistance obtained from using the net to supplement educational knowledge, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
that internet facility can ever replace traditional course
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
in schools is completely preposterous.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Information
received from websites always bears the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
of authenticity and no elaborate insights on findings are available there either. The conventional textbooks
are written
by profound academicians and researchers of respective nations.
Therefore
, the pieces of writing they share are invaluable and reliable to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
.
For example
,
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "research".
a research
led by Oxford University in 2019 reveals that academic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
suggested by schools in the UK are alone sufficient to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
the need of all students.
In addition
to this, pupils adapt to the
extremely
useful habit of reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
by following their prescribed materials in schools.

In conclusion
, the internet has opened up a novel era of sharing unlimited access to a wide variety of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
and this theory is
absolutely
justified.
However
, students ought to follow advised workbooks in school level education
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of their proven genuineness of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
and the intuitions offered by the celebrated scholars.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay The internet will never replace traditional course books in schools. how far do you agree with this prediction? v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
341 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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Lexical Resource: 8.5
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