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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? v.21

The internet has greatly increased our access to information. v. 21
These days search engines make it easier for us to reach any knowledge in the world. In this essay I'm going to present the reasons that I strongly believe in on how a great it is to reach the information. Firstly, Make learning cheaper. For them studying and paying for college is nearly impossible. And that's when the internet comes. Accessing information in one click for knowledge in great universities will make the poor people learn and educate them self for the job they desire and get paid every month. For instance, the web contains all kinds of teaching website, either if its specialised in learning or not. such as, YouTube. For that, Hamas from any class and society can gain the knowledge they want without paying as much as they will if they take courses in real life. Secondly, it saved people time. Back in 15 years ago, it was really consuming to get the right info from the right source. However, now it takes less than 5 seconds to get the thing that you are wondering about. You just have to google it. For example, researchers and master student spend long time just to copy the info they need to complete their papers. But now all they have to do is to get permission for the library database and save the student day and effort. To conclude, internet now has made learning less expensive. And it saves people time. I think that it has a great impact in every aspect in life.
These days search engines
make
it easier for us to reach any knowledge in the world. In this essay I'm going to present the reasons that I
strongly
believe in on how a great it is to reach the information.

Firstly
,
Make
learning cheaper. For them studying and paying for college is
nearly
impossible. And that's when the internet
comes
. Accessing information in one click for knowledge in great universities will
make
the poor
people
learn and educate them self for the job they desire and
get
paid every month.
For instance
, the web contains all kinds of teaching website, either if its
specialised
in learning or not.
such
as, YouTube. For that, Hamas from any
class
and society can gain the knowledge they want without paying as much as they will if they take courses in real life.

Secondly
, it saved
people
time. Back in 15 years ago, it was
really
consuming to
get
the right info from the right source.
However
,
now
it takes less than 5 seconds to
get
the thing that you are wondering about. You
just
have to
google it.
For example
, researchers and master student spend long time
just
to copy the info they need to complete their papers.
But
now
all they
have to
do is to
get
permission for the library database and save the student day and effort.

To conclude
, internet
now
has made learning less expensive. And it saves
people
time. I
think
that it has a great impact in every aspect in life.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay The internet has greatly increased our access to information. v. 21

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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