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The internet can't replace a classroom teacher

The internet can't replace a classroom teacher PRe9B
As the growing new generation, growing technology, studies are also going advance, there are many sources to study online. But the old method of going to school, studing with friends with a human teacher, no one can displace it. The development it provides is necessary for growth of young children. Sitting for hours in front of a screen is never worth it. It provides with fever merits and a lot of de- merits. it damages our eyes and makes us handicapped, it also decreases the social interaction with people and makes us an introvert. Internet, with a platform for studies, we are forgetting that it is also a huge platform for entertainment, which is a huge distraction in life of a student. It puts us in a comfort zone, from where it is very difficult to come out.
As the growing new generation, growing technology, studies are
also
going advance, there are
many
sources to study online.
But
the
old
method of going to school,
studing
with friends with a human teacher, no one can displace it. The development it provides is necessary for growth of young children. Sitting for hours in front of a screen is never worth it. It provides with fever merits and
a lot of
de
- merits.
it
damages our eyes and
makes
us handicapped, it
also
decreases the social interaction with
people
and
makes
us an introvert. Internet, with a platform for studies, we are forgetting that it is
also
a huge platform for entertainment, which is a huge distraction in life of a student. It puts us in a comfort zone, from where it is
very
difficult to
come
out.
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IELTS essay The internet can't replace a classroom teacher

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  American English
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138 words
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