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In the developing world, rainforests are being cut down to make more farmland. One idea is to turn these areas into protected parks. What do you think about this idea? Is there an alternative to saving these rainforests? What is your opinion?

In the developing world, rainforests are being cut down to make more farmland. One idea is to turn these areas into protected parks. What do you think about this idea? Is there an alternative to saving these rainforests? What is your opinion? x81My
New trends in the developing world include deforestation to plant food trees, short-term food crops, and animal husbandry. Some people believe that planned parks should be established to protect forests from deforestation. In my opinion, I agree with the suggestion, but another method that can be considered as well is to designate farmlands, and these will be further discussed in this essay. Population growth, particularly in developing countries, equals greater food demand. Due to the scarcity of arable land, they are forced to clear forests to make room for farming, the same thing happens to other countries where food exports are their main source of income. Economic progress necessitates the extension of the farmed area. Some farmers argue that economic progress requires expansion of the cultivated area, production of trees and fruits, and raising livestock, which brings them more economic benefits than the forests bring These natural forests might be converted into conservation parks to safeguard them and limit the quantity of forest that is destroyed each year, according to certain theories. This would reduce the risk of natural disasters while also preserving the ecosystem’s forest richness and ensuring the secure protection of endangered animals and plants. Another alternative is that we need to create designated zones where humans may grow food without intruding on forest land. This will allow us to maintain a safe distance between forest productivity and development. To summarize, I am completely in favor of converting these jungles into protected parks. Instead of taking down trees, we need regulations that favor forest conservation or intercropping- assigning cultivated area
New trends in the developing world include deforestation to plant
food
trees, short-term
food
crops, and animal husbandry.
Some
people
believe that planned parks should
be established
to protect
forests
from deforestation. In my opinion, I
agree
with the suggestion,
but
another method that can
be considered
as well
is to designate farmlands, and these will be
further
discussed in this essay.

Population growth,
particularly
in
developing countries
, equals greater
food
demand. Due to the scarcity of arable land, they
are forced
to
clear
forests
to
make
room for farming, the same thing happens to other countries where
food
exports are their main source of income. Economic progress necessitates the extension of the farmed area.
Some
farmers argue that economic progress requires expansion of the cultivated area, production of trees and fruits, and raising livestock, which brings them more economic benefits than the
forests
bring


These natural
forests
might
be converted
into conservation parks to safeguard them and limit the quantity of
forest
that is
destroyed
each year, according to certain theories. This would
reduce
the
risk
of natural disasters while
also
preserving the ecosystem’s
forest
richness and ensuring the secure protection of endangered animals and plants. Another alternative is that we need to create designated zones where humans may grow
food
without intruding on
forest
land. This will
allow
us to maintain a safe distance between
forest
productivity and development.

To summarize
, I am completely in favor of converting these jungles into protected parks.
Instead
of taking down trees, we need regulations that favor
forest
conservation or
intercropping
- assigning cultivated
area
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IELTS essay In the developing world, rainforests are being cut down to make more farmland. One idea is to turn these areas into protected parks. What do you think about this idea? Is there an alternative to saving these rainforests? What is your opinion?

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