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The given tabular represented information of the inhabitants of three cities. The resident predict of 2000 and real society of 2000. It can be vividly seen that São Paulo was the actual highest populace in 1990. It was exactly 15 millions, while shanghai was closely with them as minor difference around 1. 5 millions; however the city of Jakarta had the least peoples were 9. 5 thousand form the other two cities. Probing ahead forecast citizen of the metropolis for 2000(made in 1990) as greatest population In São Paulo were 24 much whereas the ratio of two other cities Jakarta and Shanghai were 14 and 17 total in respectively. Moving towards the rest of information, São Paulo and Jakarta have been approach same millions in real residents in 2000, whereas shanghai was showed decline around 5. 5 millions. Overall, São Paulo populations is peak in the given year, whilst shanghai was plummeted there residents
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tabular represented information of the inhabitants of three
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cities
. The resident predict of 2000 and real society of 2000. It can be
vividly
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seen
that São Paulo was the actual highest populace in 1990. It was exactly 15
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millions
, while shanghai was
closely
with them as minor difference around 1. 5
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millions
;
however
the city of Jakarta had the least peoples were 9. 5 thousand form the other two
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cities
. Probing ahead forecast citizen of the metropolis for 2000(made in 1990) as greatest population In São Paulo were 24 much whereas the ratio of two other
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cities
Jakarta and Shanghai were 14 and 17 total in
respectively
. Moving towards the rest of information, São Paulo and Jakarta have been approach same
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millions
in real residents in 2000, whereas shanghai was
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showed
decline around 5. 5
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millions
.
Overall
, São Paulo populations is peak in the
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given
year, whilst shanghai
was plummeted
there residents
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IELTS essay the inhabitants of three cities

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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